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Post by Albireo on Mar 15, 2010 4:39:08 GMT -5
Well, the upper body is what I'd say attractive, but the lower isn't the same.
Nothing's wrong proportionately, however you can try accentuating the hips, and making the feet a bit smaller for a feeling of delicacy. Well to do that, you'd have to make her a bit taller, but that's by increasing the height of the legs. There's also the matter of the thights too. But I'll leave it up to you to figure out how to do that. Because its a pain to explain.
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Post by Goku Goku Gadget Saiyan on Mar 16, 2010 16:57:30 GMT -5
Boosh. Trias.
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Post by Professor Fann on Mar 16, 2010 22:54:25 GMT -5
Nice art. But it seems to me that he appears to be a bit short because of the stone-like still legs of his, probably the boots gave me that strange impression. Upper body is just fine.
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Post by Ruinaru on Mar 17, 2010 21:03:35 GMT -5
Upper body looks great, detail on the legs is good, but the legs are too short and close together. Given the way his torso is twisted and leaning, he'd be extremely off-balance and probably pretty uncomfortable.
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Post by Nightmare on Mar 17, 2010 23:58:55 GMT -5
I'm pretty sure he was going for an angled shot. If that's the case, the length of the legs is fine.
But I still don't like the pose his lower body is in, looks way too stiff compared to the relaxed upper body.
Overall though, I like it. Good work.
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Post by Goku Goku Gadget Saiyan on Jun 18, 2010 21:41:38 GMT -5
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Post by Ruinaru on Jun 19, 2010 0:32:39 GMT -5
Quite good, sir, quite good.
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Post by Bloodbane on Jun 19, 2010 0:35:59 GMT -5
Holy hell, what is that? Looks awesome, but what is it?
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Post by Professor Fann on Jun 19, 2010 7:22:37 GMT -5
It's a monster of some sort. Hahah. Nice pencils.
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Post by Goku Goku Gadget Saiyan on Jun 28, 2010 9:42:31 GMT -5
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Post by Professor Fann on Jun 28, 2010 23:14:48 GMT -5
Nice piece.
But I thought the feet armour, especially at the sole, would have to be proportionately big.
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Post by Goku Goku Gadget Saiyan on Jul 3, 2010 14:50:57 GMT -5
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Post by Professor Fann on Jul 4, 2010 9:04:09 GMT -5
Eh ... I guess it's pretty okay so far. Nothing wrong.
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Post by Goku Goku Gadget Saiyan on Aug 12, 2010 15:58:37 GMT -5
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Post by MasterOmegaX on Aug 12, 2010 16:34:09 GMT -5
The foreshortening on the sword looks good. I think you should align your strokes better so the outlines don't look too scratchy, or try drawing longer strokes instead of tiny short ones so it looks cleaner.
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