Albireo's Art Thread

[Professor Fann]

But I'd do say that this new one is more delicious than the first large art you made.

That may be extra encouragement.

[Albireo]

For awhile I've been thinking of drawing an action scene of some sort D:

[aritheo]

When it comes to drawing more than a few people, my proportions start to go off.
And I noticed that for you, your proportions stayed the same throughout.
Very hard to do, at least in my opinion, so that's really awesome that you could. <3

Nice job, I like how the characters look, and you have a nice unique style. <3

[Professor Fann]

Sept 4, 2008 3:52:28 GMT -5 Albireo said:

For awhile I've been thinking of drawing an action scene of some sort D:

Hmm ... but so far I have not seen anything like that from you.

We'd see how everything turns out.

[Albireo]

Well, I've drawn a Pre-action scene, but it features the character by themselves. And I also drew an angel out of the blue

The Angel

The Swordsman of Autumn

Also, people have told me, that my style was unique. A comment I really love to hear

[Nightmare]

It really is a unique style. I like these two pieces a lot, especially the angel. The poses are good, the pictures are clean, and the linework is clear and fits the mood of the picture. And I really like the wings on the Angel.

Keep up the good work. XP

[Albireo]

That's probably the 15th or so time that someone's commented on the wings D:

But when comments come from a mod/admin, it feels better somehow

[Albireo]

Hmmm... Another large one that concentrated a lot more on Background

The fountain shadow is kinda crap though D:

Teh Stand-off!

I also made this one around a day or two ago

Winter Maiden

[Professor Fann]

The Stand Off is fine, as it's your first. So far no problems. The rest is just refinement of extreme details of all sorts. Like how to draw a fountain well, how to use a ruler on certain occasions and to make the effects of the wind whirling better.

However, comparing with Winter Maiden, there's a terrible lack of difference between the male and female faces. You might want to be more curvy on the female's face and cheek lines. And the chest region, which defines the female's features is ... like sloppy plasticine. You need to observe the slenderness of the female body to get that right. And her posture is too stiff.

Needs more movements and poses, both the arts.

[Albireo]

Well, to be honest I rushed the Winter Maiden D: So I'll have a better version when I feel like it.

Still no action scenes, since poses and perspective and angle are a b*tch D:

But I was able to get some perspective down, so here's my proudest creation yet D:

[Professor Fann]

Nice pose. I see no flaws ... except just maybe I think his other hand is missing ... or non-existent.

[Albireo]

A little right of the name tag, you should be able to see a bit of the shoulder

But wow, I didn't expect to get a "no flaws" comment D:

[HZ]

It looks very good.
Nothing I would really change here, so good work b(^_^)

[Albireo]

I have about 6 other characters in mind

The ones I'm mainly thinking about are the wind and fire guy D:

And the darkness guy D:

[Professor Fann]

That's good. Get to it when you're fine with time.