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Post by UlforceVeedramon Zero on Jul 12, 2005 21:16:21 GMT -5
yeah...im not that good at spriting, but ill post what i have. also, could some of you maybe help me out a bit? Here's Astro Omega....he seems kinda crappy to me...but oh well  here's an edit of a megaman sprite...i seriously have no idea whatsoever how i got the base sprite, if its urs, tell me...if its not..well thats good  Heres one of a char i made named vex. Reaver.0 helped out...its not entirely finished tho edit: heres a link... img.photobucket.com/albums/v174/VA_Ninja/Lenus%20Stuff/Vexdash.bmpSuggestions on how to improve please...please? |
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Post by UlforceVeedramon Zero on Jul 12, 2005 21:16:57 GMT -5
edit: dangit, why cant i see that last sprite!?
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Post by jabberwock on Jul 13, 2005 3:19:35 GMT -5
For Astro Omega: first save your work as PNG or Bitmap 24. His head: fix it/ edit it. Can't see what it is (Colonel Head from MMBN5 maybe). For the little 'wings' on shoulders and feet, don't use black -try to never use pure black- but dark blue. Try to move the shoulders'one a bit to the right. However I like the idea.
For Megaman: fix the buster, or change it: it's ugly to me. For the 'tentacles' on his back, good work you have used megaman's colors, but the left one must be a bit higher than the right's one IMO. The helmet: just a thing, the 'wings' which is behind is helmet must be moved a bit to the right and a bit down.
For Vex: nice helmet and nice gun. Mainly recolor yes but everybody have begun by a recolor. The next time and if you could (I'm sure you could) edit the legs a bit. Anyway, I like it.
Continue spriting, you have very good ideas.
P.S:excuse my limited vocabulary.
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Post by Kaname on Jul 13, 2005 3:56:02 GMT -5
I don't know anything about this because i never tried but IMO they look okay bu can use some work as jabberwock said.
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Post by UlforceVeedramon Zero on Jul 13, 2005 11:41:59 GMT -5
For Vex: nice helmet and nice gun. Mainly recolor yes but everybody have begun by a recolor. The next time and if you could (I'm sure you could) edit the legs a bit. Anyway, I like it. Continue spriting, you have very good ideas. P.S:excuse my limited vocabulary. Reaver made the legs for me, but i didnt post the one with edited lets because i used a sprite sheet seven made in that vex too, so i wanted to get permission before i went any further with those sprites. chaos said he said its ok tho...thanks seven |
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Post by UlforceVeedramon Zero on Jul 13, 2005 19:48:50 GMT -5
Continue spriting, you have very good ideas. unfortunately, i have run out. can somebody give me an idea or 2? everyone i asked said wierd things, like space pirate, an orc chopping an ogre's head off, or a mm legends sprite. i need stuff for...y'know...my level... well anyways can somebody give me an idea? Edit: oh yeah, heres the basic shape of astro's head i was trying to get....but make the...spike things...a little smaller....  im not asking for somebody to do it, just saying what i was aiming for. |
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Post by UlforceVeedramon Zero on Jul 13, 2005 22:29:52 GMT -5
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Post by MasterOmegaX on Jul 14, 2005 2:03:52 GMT -5
I kinda like the boots, though, you shoulld stiill add a shine. Don't just erase the shine so you can put the knee thing on, re draw the shine in the light area of the leg.
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Post by Kaname on Jul 14, 2005 2:15:39 GMT -5
i think it looks great better than i would've done lol
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Post by UlforceVeedramon Zero on Jul 14, 2005 9:40:43 GMT -5
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Post by evochron on Jul 14, 2005 10:45:48 GMT -5
Very nice. I like the Vex sprites, and try to do some more poses. And the Astro head.....lets move on to new subject shall we?
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Post by Nightmare on Jul 14, 2005 11:58:15 GMT -5
Try a look more like this. The legs look a bit better like this and the edited chest makes it look more original. You don't have to use this, just a suggestion. |
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Post by UlforceVeedramon Zero on Jul 15, 2005 9:28:40 GMT -5
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Post by UlforceVeedramon Zero on Jul 15, 2005 9:53:55 GMT -5
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Post by DarkZ on Jul 15, 2005 12:26:17 GMT -5
Hmm, looks better than the first one. keep it up. ^^
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