Jabberwock's sprites

[jabberwock]

What can I say? Here's my sprites...
Kain from blood omen 2...Made by me and a friend of mine.(soul reaver by Xero bloodline)

A generic Zero...Crappy

A sprite of my character, Jabberwock

And finally, a Son Goharoto's Shadowman customized. The beautiful scarf was done by Reaver.0(the katana too).
So? C+C please...AND NO SPAMMING LIKE: OOOWW IT'S BAD, or OOOWWW it's cool...Just say what is wrong and what is right...
(Edit: None of my sprites, except Kain and the generic series, are PD, so don't use or edit without my permission please. It's not someone will steal them, but...)

[Omega X]

cool ^_^ i like the shadowman one.

[darkreaver]

i told you, the scarf is "Disguises" (from Pagnarok Online)
its not bad at all...

[Omega X]

yeah, i agree with ReaVer.0

[jabberwock]

Thanks but I need to work a bit on Jabberwock's legs...
And Reaver: you had the idea of the scarf, so, for me, you made it.
A common fourth armor for X,

and 3 gen' hunters in this armor, (generic hunters made by NMMZ I think.)

Okay, the purple one look weird...But C+C? (not like someone would use it, but common fourth armor and Ghunters are PD...Feel free to use, and wait until I finish their sheets to use them.)

[ZeroX]

I like how you upgraded the generic hunters good job ^^

[Knuckles]

yeah, if you sheeted them, it would be cool, cos then thered be more variety in cannon fodder for comics! maybe even give them some new weapons so they liek higher class hunters. nice work

[jabberwock]

They are just cannon fodder so Claas C hunters. Don't worry I'll sheet them soon. Tomorrow maybe, but for now here's a sprite made for my bro, here comes sytry:

[darkreaver]

the wing shading should be fixed.. its also quite messy looking, recolor that sigmas cloth thing with a bit darker/more greyish shades or something.

[Andrew]

The leg shading for the generic hunters is pillow-shaded, or it seems to be, that should be looked at.

Also, from the angle of 'Sytry's face, the wing closer to the front should be higher than the one behind. An example of this angling is X's shoulders, the one on his left(our right) is higher than the other. Make the wings the same way.

-Paragon

[jabberwock]

I don't understand what you mean by pillow-shaded, but I agree that there's a problem in the shading. I must reduce the clearest part of the legs, right?
For Sytry: I must move his right wing behind his left wing, am I right? I will try to fix that.

Edit: Gen' hunters modified: Worse? Better?

Sytry, new color and I've changed his right wing position: Worse? Better?

[darkreaver]

better.. change the arms color from windows colors to something else, also the hairs shading could be better.. it looks 16bit'ish chause of the light grey in it.

[jabberwock]

Eeh!! That's not windows color! That's an ice armor made with...Okay, that's windows colors. The hair was made by my bro so I don't know if I must change them...Not like I'm a sado-maso, but I need some advice on the Jabberwock's sprites.

Edit: guys, you've forced me to change Sytry's sprites without my bro's permission...Even if I've mainly done him. 90%-10% and I don't know if a recolor of a Shadow's armor can be count. Ayway here's:

[darkreaver]

getting better. i think... It still looks kinda newbish but w/e. aint my sprite =P

[Omega X]

lol, my sprites suck, you dont even want to imagine them.