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Post by Professor Fann on Oct 31, 2010 2:02:13 GMT -5
They are all good. Nice going.
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Post by Cem on Oct 31, 2010 6:18:29 GMT -5
New dude for an RP in the future named Harlan: In the past, his Crow Tribe parents were killed by unknown forces on their journey to serve as liaison between the Crow Tribe and the Rhino Tribe of the Eastern Reverse Lands. Harlan was picked up by a member of the Rhino tribe and raised as one. He inherited their martial arts style, magic and even their religion. The culture is heavily based upon the Principles of Lightning. Because his parents failed in their mission, the Rhino Tribe never received the distress call from the Crow Tribe. The Crow Tribe was forced to retreat into another Cardinal Reverse Continent* Cemmerian studied the Principles of Lightning with the Rhino Tribe(obviously he retained no philosophical or spiritual value from his training, but picked up some spells and stances) so he and Harlan have almost identical skills. However, due to Cemmerian's former training in the Shock Sword style and Harlan's Crow Tribe-like physical build, their fighting styles differ in their various forms. *There are four Cardinal Reverse Lands. One for each direction/season. In order to enter one from Earth you must be in possession of something forged from any material in a Reverse Land. The only means of travel to a Reverse Land is by standing in the symbol that represents the season corresponding to the Cardinal direction during the season: North=Spring, South=Winter, East=Spring and West=Fall. You may not enter the Winter Continent during the spring, etc. Woah I got carried away...
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Post by Sorrum on Oct 31, 2010 23:44:20 GMT -5
Everything is out of proportion. The head, legs, and hands are huge compared to the chest and arms. Can't see the joints in his arms well enough. Shoulders are practically non-existent as well as any muscles he may have. Shirt looks like it's hanging off his nips, or he has some boobs.
The swords, I'm assuming are supposed to be matching swords, have different lengths and widths pretty much everywhere. Looks like you forgot to shade the handle in the dude's left hand. Also, I can't tell where the light source is supposed to be with the shading you did.
Could use work overall.
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Post by Cem on Nov 1, 2010 5:47:23 GMT -5
Thank you, great master, for showing up and blessing me with your wisdom. I especially appreciate you coming out of the blue and tearing me apart like that. THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUUUUUCHHH for your comments.
I don't see how the legs are disproportionate >_> And I realize the hands are large, I did that on purpose... Have you never seen an anime character with huge hands before? The swords and arms are slightly different lengths, yes, I shrugged it off. There's no problem with the shirt, you're obviously not familiar with certain anime physiques. Also never say "nips"...
And yeah it could use work... thanks for the insight. Real constructive, Sorrum.I'm a douche
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Post by Vile on Nov 1, 2010 18:27:30 GMT -5
She/He seems really stiff and awkward. It doesn't look like a stance I would take while holding two blades, or a stance I would be at..... ever.
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Post by Nightmare on Nov 1, 2010 23:55:25 GMT -5
Well I like it, Cem. Good work. XD
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Post by Professor Fann on Nov 2, 2010 0:52:41 GMT -5
I like it as well.
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Post by Cem on Nov 17, 2010 6:15:09 GMT -5
While Vile and Sorrum were talking about making Sorrum a character I whipped this up in about 4 minutes - annnnd then I tried to draw Sunny again, but again... she said the hair was wrong >_>; -
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Post by Vile on Nov 17, 2010 11:00:14 GMT -5
Sorrum, the badass
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Post by Cem on Nov 29, 2010 4:19:10 GMT -5
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Post by Professor Fann on Nov 29, 2010 4:34:26 GMT -5
That's kinda violent ...
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Post by Nightmare on Nov 29, 2010 5:40:08 GMT -5
Violently awesome.
Good work, Cem. XD
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Post by Vile on Nov 29, 2010 13:44:06 GMT -5
What a creative way to murder! Along with using Nightmare as a tool so you didn't do it yourself. That was well played.
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Post by Cem on Dec 3, 2010 5:02:47 GMT -5
I made this cause I've recently become obsessed with www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/544332El Drawing-o: img25.imageshack.us/img25/5273/tengokunotou.jpgIf you want to try my level if you unlock level creator: 200c111101090028000000000000000001021e1502041602040003030103030203030b03160e03041103161a031401040e0504160804040e081018081000091d1309131c0916000a25010a21020a21030a21040a26050a07060a07070a07080a07090a090a0a090c0a090d0a070e0a070f0a07100a07110a07120a07130a07140a07150a07160a12170a07180a07190a071a0a071b0a071c0a071e0a15000b23010b29020b29030b29040b24050b03060b03070b03080b03090b050a0b050b0b050c0b050d0b030e0b030f0b03100b03110b03120b03130b03140b03150b03160b03170b03180b03190b031a0b031b0b031c0b031d0b031e0b031f0b03|Cem's level :|Player|Cem|
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Post by Professor Fann on Dec 4, 2010 9:57:04 GMT -5
Hmm, a new drawing style. Simple but very interesting. It's good.
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