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Post by maverickhunteraxl on Jun 19, 2006 19:57:56 GMT -5
nice story.
... i wonder when i will get my story up if i were not lazy to finish them up...
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Post by swimstud600 on Jun 19, 2006 20:01:20 GMT -5
If you read all of that I applaud you. I don't know when I'll get another up, work is slowing me down and my next priority is carnival entries.
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Post by swimstud600 on Jun 24, 2006 23:13:21 GMT -5
I wonder how many people saw this. I expected more than 1 comment, I thought this was a decent chapter <.< Anyway I'll get back to work on this soon.
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Post by SLA¥ΣR on Jul 2, 2006 2:21:38 GMT -5
OMG, CH.9 was crazy
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Post by Nightmare on Jul 2, 2006 5:28:46 GMT -5
Buh? I thought I had commented here. Guess not. >XP I really liked it, although it could have been a little more descriptive at some parts. But all in all I thought it was really good.
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Post by swimstud600 on Jul 4, 2006 23:33:33 GMT -5
Thanks guys. The chapters are all screwy, I keep thinking of better places to end them. So there will be a standard mission soon and a few more plot twists. Stay tooned
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Post by swimstud600 on Jul 6, 2006 0:24:24 GMT -5
Since Nightmare is being slow distributing the booster packs I decided to be productive and use the time to do a bit of writing tonight. Expect an update soon.
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Post by swimstud600 on Jul 7, 2006 1:05:33 GMT -5
Here's your update. Enjoy
Nothing could have prepared Jet for what had happened. Signas was destroyed, X was destroyed, the hunter base was annialated. But X's sacrifice gave Jet the time to grab Reaver and fly away. He mourned the loss of life inside the base and hoped that others had made it out during X's diversion. Jet stood up and surveyed the destruction. Then he turned to Reaver. "Signas is destroyed. What will you do now?"
Reaver stood in awe, overlooking the remains of the base. He wasn't quite sure what to do next. He stood for a while, saying nothing... Jet seemed to be patient for a response, he waited quietly for Reaver to speak. As Reaver was finally about to respond, his eyes widened and his jaw dropped. Suddenly he cries out loud, "OH crap! FLARE!" Leaving Jet behind, he ran back to the smoldering crater as fast as he could. Jet was about to follow when he heard a voice behind him. "WHO THE HELL DID THIS?" Jet turns to the rookie behind him, Abyss. "It was Signas... and he's dead now. Along with X... and anyone inside the hunter HQ..." He cries out in rage and frustration and sinks to the ground. After a few minutes, Jet regains his composure and realizes that he still has a duty to do. A duty he must do so that those who died may not die in vain. "Come on," he yells to Abyss. "The mavericks will be back, we need to use this time to search the remains of the base for survivors who may be trapped in the rubble." (And Flare...) thinks Jet as he dashes off.
Reaver called around for Flare, checking under rubble and piles of corpses. Slightly panicked and fearing the worst, he couldn't see him anywhere. Then he saw something familiar... The scythe of Flare, still active, was imbedded in the ground. Reaver came closer to it to examine it and noticed an arm still tightly gripping the weapon. It was Flare's arm, heavily damaged with wires hanging out from it and making small sparks. The rest of the body was nowhere to be seen. Reaver dropped to his knees and knelt down in front of the scythe. His head lowered as tears fell to the ground...
Jet continued digging through the rubble and was overjoyed to see Sub's mercenaries had survived their mission, they had come to help. As their search expanded they found many hunters, some rookies and some of the more expirienced ones. There was no sign of X though. Or Signas. Or Flare. And then Jet saw Reaver. He was down on the ground, he seemed to be in pain. And then he saw the fiery scythe and understood. "Flare," he whispered, "You were my enemy... and I wish it weren't so. Rest in peace..."
Alia came over, she began crying as she saw the remains of X. She move forward to touch them. As she stroked X's face, X burst into pieces and the wind carried them away. Alia's sobs were echoed by the thunder. Zero came over, he watched as Alia was lead away. Their eyes met and both saw the tears in the other's eyes. He walked to the spot where the blast impacted, where X had given his life trying to fight it off. Catching a piece of X out of the wind, he turned to the rest of the hunters. "Listen up," Zero began, "Today marks a new history in the maverick wars. Today we lost both a great commander and one of our greatest warriors. One who fought for truth, justice and everlasting peace. Today we witnessed his sacrifice so we could continue on in his place. He saved us so we could carry on his hopes and his dreams. Signas also sacrificed himself to save us, it is true he fired the weapon but in doing so he crushed quite a few of the mavericks generals. The mavericks lost 7 generals only 4 remain. Their huge fleet was cut apart by the cannon. Signas knew as he fired it he would only get 1 shot, the cannon is now falling from the sky and selfdestructing. Signas, as his final act set it to land on Area Zero, the location of the previous space station crash, Eurasia. This way no other, not maverick nor hunter may use that terrible weapon again." Zero paused after he said this to compose himself. After a minute he continued. "The casualties from this move have been numerous and great for both sides. Thus far, our losses include X, Signas and 24 veteran hunters. X's sacrifice allowed us to rescue all the rookies, all the HQ staff and a good portion of the surrounding area's people. And as I stated before we have confirmed reports of 7 dead maverick generals leaving 4 active. We also have reports of 5 wrecked air fleets, 3 mech platoons and a host of minor mavericks and mechaloids. Now I suggest everyone rests up because this fight isn't over yet. The mavericks will be back." Zero finished his speech and walked into the base to go comfort Alia.
Axl stood outside with the rest of the hunters dumbfounded at the loss of X "I don't get it, how could X just die? Its unreal." said Axl. The rest of the hunters turned to go back into the demolished base leaving Axl and a few rookies alone outside to go over what had just happened.
Jet and company continued to dig through the rubble. Hours later he came across a familiar looking helmit. "Tank? Tank! Oh god Tank not you!" As he dug franticly a med team rushed over. Tank was lifted onto a stretcher. His armor was cracked and he was bleeding freely. As the doctors marched him away Jet burst into tears. Sub came over and but an arm on Jet, he too had tears running down his face over their friend.
After kneeling on the ground for quite some time, Reaver got up and stared blankly at the scythe... "I guess... I'm the last part of Project Reaver now..." He said to the scythe. He pulled the weapon out of the ground and stared into the flames of the blade. "Signas has been destroyed... But not by my hand. Still... indirectly I may have been responsable for him activating the cannon... At least I'm sure it was activated due to the overwhelming force of mavericks which I was a part of..." He looks around, seeing a few more mavericks fleeing to the extraction point and some hunters who seem to have little interest in him. "But... what am I to do now? The mavericks are of little interest to me without Flare tagging along." He pulls off the arm from the scythe, holding it in his hand... He stood there for quite some time, finally he deactivated the scythe and placed it on his back along with his own scythe. He held the Flare's arm in his arms like it was a baby, and wanders away. Feeling the guilt for Flare's demise, he ventured into the distance...
Still saddened about Tank, Jet wanders the remains of the base looking for more survivors. He sees hunters like Tony and Fusion who appear injured but ok as he continues to search the rubble. "Why would Signas do that?" he wonders. "We were winning. And even if they did break through we had a sewer defense planned out." Then he noticed Reaver walking away. Even though he was a maverick, Jet couldn't help feeling sorry for him. He also wondered what his next move would be, would he simply walk away or would he be back with more rage than ever before? Jet shook his head, only time will tell.
Meanwhile atop a building, a short distance away from the hunter HQ, Lunchbox peered through his sniper rifle. He radioed Sub who was still at the base. "I think I see something..."
Pyro Cerebrus stood atop his lumbering air craft. "Turn it around this instant!" he barked at the pilot. "But sir-" the pilot began. "I don't care what the orders are, I'm going back to finish the job!" Pyro Cerebrus said as he cut the pilot off. The pilot obliged and manuevered the large ship around to return to the HQ.
In a few short minutes, the ship was in firing range. "Sir, shall I give the order for open fire?" the second in command asked. "No, I want to face them by myself, so I can see what they truely are capable of. Open the hatches and let me out, after that you are free to leave." Cerebrus responded. "Bu-bu-but sir, we can't leave," the pilot began. "You can and you will, those are your orders." The pilot opened the hatches as he was commanded and Pyro Cerebrus leaped out. He landed near the crater the cannon had created. The hunters still outside reacted quickly to his presence, a few ran inside and the rest engaged him in combat.
Name: Pyro Cerebrus Model number: bxf 452- flaming trash collector Height: 6’11” Weight: 350lbs Armor description: large blocky armor with red and orange sections on the chest, spikes surround neck and wrists, the charcoal thigh and biceps reveal a massive musculature under the armor. Weapon specialty: burning chain (fires a wave of flames 4 feet in an undulating motion, charged fires a larger flame burst 10 feet) Unit: maverick 6th Short bio: was compacting trash when he stumbled upon a fragment of the sigma virus, upon torching it he became corrupted and filled with a desire to burn things and fueled by a state of the art fission core capable of producing heat in excess of 4000 degrees celcuis. He is distrustful of others but once he becomes friends with them he is fiercely loyal to them.
Jet turned around at the sound of the airship. He was about to blast it but stopped when it dropped off one unit and fled. He focused instead on the lone maverick. Even though this being was not responsible for the death of X, Jet channeled all the hatred and fury he had into his arm cannon and fired at the maverick leader. As the energy faded away Pyro was still standing, though parts of his armor had been torn away. "Impossible..." began Jet. He turned to Abyss, "We need to attack now!"
Jet tried to signal to Zero and some of the vetran hunters what was going on. He didn't know if anyone saw him but he decided to attack anyway. He flew into Pyro knocking him backwards. Dodging a blast of fire Jet dashed in and sliced him. He waited on the other side of Pyro knowing Abyss would begin his attack. When Abyss fired a huge beam, Jet blasted Pyro from behind. The beams impacted the ground and Pyro Cerebrus was caught completely off guard, the beam ripped into Cerebrus and was causing heavy damage. Although his core was absorbing much of the energy, his metal exterior was in rough shape. As the beam vanished cerebrus climbed slowly out of the hole his armor was visibly damaged but the fire in his eyes was burning with a ferocity no one had seen before. Cerebrus stood up and ran at Abyss, with a creak and groan of gigantic servos Pyro Cerebrus batted Abyss into Jet. Then he grabbed some of the scrap metal nearby and began to cover himself with it, once he was fully covered, he trigered his weapon and welded the metal to his body, effectively covering all the holes. He realised he was still damaged on the inside but his new armor plating would help him take out the troublesome rookies.
Flash saw that Abyss what about to depleted and blurred in front of Cerebrus. He grabbed pyro blasted him with the omega buster he had taken from the armory and drew his saber. "Its thanks to you mavericks X had to be killed! Its thanks to you mavericks that hunter HQ is destroyed! This is for X!" He slashed him in the chest and blurred out and in again to Abyss and Jet. "I will not let another hunter be killed!"
Sub ran as fast as he could. Lunchbox had just informed him of the maverick general's arrival and he knew his help would be appreciated. "Besides," he thought, "I might have lost Tank. I'm not losing Jet." He rounded a pile of debris and saw the maverick moving to attack a rookie. He was on the ground and appeared to be injured. As the maverick closed in a sniper bullet crashed into his armor, tearing off a piece of the scrapmetal. Sub could just make out the tiny figure in the distance that was Lunchbox as he reloaded his sniper rifle. Sub jumped into the fight, firing madly which drew the general away from the injured rookie. Then the maverick let loose a blast of fire, searing Sub's armor. He collapsed to the ground. It was too much, he could not fight any longer.
"Sub!" yelled Jet, seeing what had happened. When Pyro heard his shout he whirled around and shot a blast of fire at Jet. Jet jumped into the air and used his boots to avoid the blast. Snarling, the maverick sent another blast towards Jet. This time Jet used the ice shot taken from Tundra Fox and met his flame. Jet gritted his teeth, it was almost the same thing X had done, even though neither Jet or the Cerebrus could hope to match those beams. Lunchbox fired again, tearing off more armor and allowing Jet to push the flame back in Pyro's direction. Then the were deadlocked again. Jet hoped Abyss or Flash would take advantage of this distraction and hit the maverick before he ran out of energy.
Abyss appeared behind Cerebrus and blasted him, giving Jet a much needed break. Jet sank to the ground while Pyro swatted at Abyss who had disappeared. Flash jumped out of nowhere and sliced Pyro's head and dashed away. As Pyro spun around confused, Jet stood before him holding a large metal beam and swung it at Pyro's head with such force that it wrapped around his face. Growling, Pyro tore it off and returned the favor tenfold. Flash and Abyss saw Jet fall to the ground, his left eye was completely destroyed. Abyss was terrified at the sight of Jet. "How are we ever going to stop him?" he cried. Pyro Cerebrus took a menecing step closer and stopped when the unmistakable bang of a sniper rifle pierced both the night sky, and the maverick's head. Sparks flew and the maverick cried out in rage and frustration but he was not finished. He charged his flame and let loose a mighty blast, Abyss and Flash were forced to retreat and save themselves, there was no way to pick up Jet's body and move it in time. Jet lay there as the fire swept over his body and felt his mind shut down...
END OF CHAPTER 10
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Post by Nightmare on Jul 7, 2006 2:33:42 GMT -5
omfg Nuu, not Jet. ;-;
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Post by swimstud600 on Jul 7, 2006 10:47:59 GMT -5
Lots of death in the last few chapters. Adds a bit of drama.
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Post by swimstud600 on Jul 16, 2006 2:14:11 GMT -5
Pyro Cerebrus stood over Jet and laughed. He turned toward Abyss and Flash and prepared to destroy the remaining hunters. There was a flash of green and a beam of energy sliced Pyro Cerebrus down the middle of his body. "Maverick scum.." snarled Zero as he cleaved off Cerebrus's head and kicked the body into the dirt. He hurried over to Jet and knelt down examining the wounds. "You two," he said indicating to Flash and Abyss, "Take him to Lifesaver immediatly, I'll carry this mercenary."
"How are they?" Zero asked Lifesaver. The doctor slowly limped over to Zero, not even he had escaped the blast entirely, the falling debris has injured a leg and broken one of his arms. "This one," he said pointing to Sub, "will make a full recovery. Jet I'm afraid is in far worse shape. He wouldn't be alive at all if it were not for the new armor, that protected him from most of the heat. There is nothing anyone can do for his left eye, its completely gone, the most I can do is give him a mechanical replica. It won't be so bad, we can give him telescopic vision, xray vision and more improvements as they are designed." "Interesting," considered Zero. "But what about the rest of his body, he took a quite a beating before I got there." "He will be out for awhile. But with rest and time I think he will make a recovery. Who knows? His new abilities might come in handy one day." "Thank you Lifesaver, I don't know what we'd do without you." "I'm just doing my job so you can do yours," the doctor replied. "Speaking of which, you'd better get back to the command room, I know you're needed much more now.."
Weeks later in the control room Zero was panicking, with Signas' death he became the highest ranking person in maverick hunter HQ and now he was being bombarded with problems. "ENOUGH" shouted Zero as he tried vainly to get things in order. The door opened and Alia walked in. Zero managed to break away from the mob and walk over to her. "Alia, how are you?" Zero began. "Fine Zero, really. Its just... I miss him.." she replied as she looked away. "Alia, I need you to be strong and help me get this place back together, I can't deal with this alone." Zero started. Alia looked up into the crimson hunter's eyes and tried to force a smile. Zero tried to smile back but was dragged back into the angry workers mob. Alia turned to a nearby computer and sat down working feverantly on it. In a few hours time the hunters were once again called together. This time however, it was Alia giving the instructions. "Our sensors have detected a maverick base, a mobile air platform code named the Hammer. It was one of the ships which was present during the attack on our base. If we knock out that ship we can strike a definite blow to the mavericks, but we must not to knock it out of the sky while it's over any city. I would like to give you more info but we don't have anything more and our time is running short before the ship will begin to move again. Hunters dismissed."
Jet was dismissed from the medbay and eager for action. Because the ship was mobile, the hunters could not teleport to the Hammer. Jet knew this and as the others discussed how best to board it he took to the skys. He flew underneath it, attacking its gun ports and vital systems. Soon, it was unable to do any more damage to the city below. His task completed, he landed on the deck of the massive ship. After fighting off a wave of guards, Jet felt the ship move. "I've got to get to the engine room so more hunters can board."
Meanwhile, the hunters had sent up airships of their own in attempt to board the Hammer but they were being knocked out of the sky left and right. Flash and Abyss happened to be aboard one of the lucky ships that hadn't been shot down. Once Jet had taken out the guns they had a much easier time, unfortunately only two hunter transports were left by that time. The hunters landed in the Hammer's garage and charged out of the transports but the mavericks were putting up heavy resistance. WABOOM! The transprts blew up taking most of the hunters with it. Flash and Abyss lay pinned down behind a pile of boxes unable to move.
Jet heard commotion in the nearby garage and hurried over to see what the trouble was. To his surprise, some hunters had boarded the Hammer. Unfortunately they were quickly being cut down. Jet hurried in and attacked the mavericks from behind. The remaining hunters took advantage of the confusion and were able to defeat the mavericks in the hanger. As reinforcements were summoned, the hunter in charge looked at Jet, Flash and Abyss. "You three, go take care of the engines, we need to get more men up here but we're out of transports. Go, we'll buy you some time." Jet nodded. "Thank you sir." He turned to the others, "Lets move!"
The three hunters hacked, slashed and blew their way to the Hammer's engine room. Jet found the main engine and sliced at it but the metal was too strong. "Blast," he thought, "I used my only det pack on the bridge..." "Alright guys," began Jet, "On 3 we all need to fire our strongest buster shot at the main engine. 3, 2, 1!" The armor could not withstand the force of 3 powerful busters and they felt the ship stop dead in the sky. "Good," thought Jet. "That'll keep them from escaping and allow any other hunters to board." Suddenly a door was blown open and three heavily armed mavericks charged in. "More grunts?" laughed Abyss. "You guys are getting repetitive." "Grunts?!" cried the leader, "We'll show you!" He charged, saber activated at Jet, who activated his own sabers. Their swords locked and sizzled with electricity. The other two mavericks moved forward to aid their friend but they were blown back by shots from Flash and Abyss. A three on three battle erupted...
Jet decided to try a tricky move. He spun one saber around attracting the mavericks attention to that blade. Jet swung with the other saber and followed up with a quick swipe from the first. He landed a glancing blow causing the maverick to howl in pain. Enraged he swung at Jet who again met his saber causing another deadlock. Jet pushed the maverick's saber upwards exposing his chest, which he burried his second saber into. The maverick fell to the floor smoking.
"Jet! Down!" yelled Flash. Jet quickly ducked a lazer blast, Flash leaped over his head and kicked the maverick back into a wall. While he was down Flash quickly dashed forward and stabbed him in the head. "Nice work," Jet congradulated him. They turned to watch Abyss who was still grappleing with his maverick. Abyss kicked his enemy in the chin and impaled his sabers into his chest. He then moved with unseen speed and cut off the head and legs in one motion. The maverick crashed to the floor. "Alright, lets move on," he said. "INTRUDERS SIGHTED" came the robotic voice of a maverick drone. Dozens of them had filed through the door and were aiming weapons at the hunters. The hunters hesitated for a moment. "... MINE!!" as they swiftly cut down each of the drones. The floor was quickly covered in scrap metal.
"So what's next?" asked Abyss. "Yeah, we did our job, other hunters can board now," Flash agreed. Jet shrugged. "I guess we just systematicly hack this place apart until we find whoever controls it." "Sounds fun to me." replied Abyss. They searched through the lower areas of the ship but didn't find much. "Hmmm...I was hoping he wouldn't be a stereotypical evil guy," sighed Abyss. "He's probably on the bridge or the highest part of the ship. "And the bridge is probably the highest place on this ship." Flash pointed out. The three continued their slaughter as they went to the elevators. They got inside the glass elevator and pressed the button for the bridge. On the way up they saw many, many grunts... When they got to the bridge Jet took out his sabers once more and stood at the ready. Flash and Abyss did likewise. The maverick general stepped forward and Abyss whispered to Jet, "Great, he's going to monolog."
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Name: Titanium Tortoise Model number: dtw 172- armored battle tactician Height: 9’ 11” Weight: 1100lbs Armor description: perfectly polished silver, and large angular points on his back polished silver as well and extremely sharp, with badges all over his chest Weapon specialty: Pierce Spear (uncharged- fires a single spear in a straight line, can pierce armor, charged- fires hundreds of spears into the air which rain down on the battle field ) Unit: maverick 2nd Short bio: Seeing his friends fall to the virus’ influence while he himself did not succomb, Titanium Tortoise sought a cure. Unfortunatly it proved fatal and led to the death of his wife to be. Soon after, he joined Sigma’s forces to take over the world so there would be no need for a cure. Titanium Tortoise is extremely intelligent, slow moving and heavily armored.
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"So you hope to defeat me? For what purpose? To cure the maverick plague? Why not end the fighting once and for all? Join us, we wouldn't be labeled mavericks if there were none to call us that. We could build a utopian city just for us, our lord and master has already begun preparations for this paradise! Join us and end this destructive conflict!" When no response was had he continued. "But if you insist on fighting I will certainly not hold back."
Meanwhile, back on the ground, the hunters were trying to put their base back together. One was rumaging around in the scrap of the base and discovered Pyro Cerebrus' husk of a body and core unit. Upon grabbing it all active hunters recieved: ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Burning Chain (fires a wave of flames 4 feet in an undulating motion, charged fires a larger flame burst 10 feet ) secondary effect- reduces fire damage by 25% and allows minor absorption of heat based techniques -----------------------------------------------------------------------
Jet fired a shot at the maverick who immediatly blasted a spear at him. Jet barely avoided being imbaled, the spear went straight into an armored mainframe, it penetrated the armor like nothing. "Watch out!" Jet cried to the others, "I doubt even our new armors would absorb that hit." He fired shot after shot into the giant tortoise but they either bounced away or had no affect. Jet landed on the other side of Titanium and blasted him with the new fire wave, counting on Abyss to do the same. The fire seemed to have more affect, the tortoise roared and stumbled around and Jet took the opportunity to fly in close and slice a gash in his head. The tortoise roared again and shot hundreds of spears into the air. "Oh crap. Watch out guys!" Jet yelled as he ran for cover.
Jet and Abyss looked at Flash who was just standing there watching as the spears shot down towards him. "Are you stupid?! Get out of the way!" Flash smirked, "Trust me, I know what I'm doing." He blurred out and suddenly there were three of him, then four, then five! They circled around Titanium firing at the confused tortoise. The spears rained down and began striking the decoys, it was impossible to evade them all. "HA!" cried the tortoise as he whipped a spear at Flash. It was moving so fast, Flash couldn't get out of the way. It flew into Flash's sholder knocking him back into the wall where he lay unmoving.
Suddenly a moter roared and a ride chaser zoomed over. Reaver leapt out and landed at the general's side, the ride chaser crashed into a heap of boxes buries Jet and Abyss. "I see you could use some help, general..." Reaver started. "Heh, well I gues you could say that. I am a little outnumbered. Care to help?" "Maybe..." Reaver's face shows a sinister smirk. He walked over to Flash's crumpled form. "Well look who's down for the count..." he said giving a powerful kick to the stomach. "I always wanted to do that," he smiled grabbing him and holding him in the air by his neck. He secretly dropped an energy tank into Flash's pocket and dropped him again. Reaver walked back to the general. "Now, let's take these guys out shall we?" he asks. Then he activated his scythe revealing blades on both ends. One was the usual ice blade, the other burned with flame...
After lifting the boxes off himself, Jet looked up to see Reaver choking Flash! Jet was appauled, he really thought Reaver would come back to the hunter's side. Leaving Flash in a heap, Reaver strode back to the maverick's side and activated him new double edged scythe. Jet activated his dual sabers again and charged at him, ready for a chaotic battle. Now that Reaver had twice the blades it would be more difficult...
As he ran he noticed Flash get up, he looked full of energy again. He began punching at Reaver which added to the confusion. Titanium took advantage of the Flash's lack of guard and slammed him huge fist into Flash's body. He hit the wall with a dull thud and lay in a heap. As Reaver looked on, Jet ran up and kicked him in the back sending him sprawling. Titanium turned and struck the ground where Jet had been standing a second before. The indent from his massive fist could clearly be seen. Jet fired another blast of fire at the general and ran once more at Reaver.
Reaver got up with a bloody nose. He turned and blasted Jet back and dashed to his master's side once more. "Ow! Damn, I should plan these things out better..." "Who do you mean?" The tortoise asked. Reaver merely grinned as Jet raced towards him. He tightly gripped the weapon in his hand, and took a battle position, glaring at Jet. When he is close enough, Reaver suddenly stabs the firey end of the scythe into the turtoise and jumps over the maverick while ripping the scythe through his belly, exposing the maverick's insides. "NOW JET! NOW'S YOUR CHANCE! TAKE HIM OUT!" He yells as he stands on top of the maverick. "Gah! You traitor!" The tortoise cried infuriated with Reaver.
"NOW JET! NOW'S YOUR CHANCE! TAKE HIM OUT!" Reaver yelled as he stood on the maverick. Jet stopped dumbstruck in mid dash. Then he realized what was happening and charged Titanium, driving his sabers into the head. He noticed Flash had also taken advantage of this opportunity and done some damage as well. Titanium stopped moving, the only sound was the occasional spark from his body. Then Flash dropped to the ground. Before Jet could say a word, Reaver grabbed him and they both teleported away. "Wha-? Reaver?! I thought... What the hell is going on?"
END OF CHAPTER 11
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Post by Nightmare on Jul 16, 2006 3:40:29 GMT -5
ooOOoo Reaver be tricky. >=D
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Post by swimstud600 on Jul 16, 2006 9:10:47 GMT -5
I love Reaver's character. You can weave him in and out of the story unexpectedly and nobody is ever quite sure what he'll do next.
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Post by Nightmare on Jul 16, 2006 20:35:50 GMT -5
Yeah, he's pretty cool. o.o Those kind of characters are always good for a story.
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Post by swimstud600 on Aug 3, 2006 19:29:18 GMT -5
Sorry about the delay, I've hit a writers block of the worst sort and I'm not sure how I'm going to fix it.
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