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Post by swimstud600 on Sept 13, 2006 20:57:57 GMT -5
Update, expect more soon.
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Post by Lern (ZX) on Sept 14, 2006 6:33:40 GMT -5
i never said anything, i understood i wont be in.
just telling you what i planned. or am planning.
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Post by Nightmare on Sept 19, 2006 22:48:04 GMT -5
I personally would have found that ending more dramatic if it was written out, instead of put in the form of a flash (a flash I had to replay hundreds of times to be able to read everything before it went beck to the questions screen. D=<)
...YARR!!
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Post by swimstud600 on Sept 20, 2006 14:50:32 GMT -5
Doesn't matter, I'm not following that format anymore, I already posted my plans for another 2.5 stories.
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Post by swimstud600 on Oct 2, 2006 20:30:56 GMT -5
"So, it was you..." Reaver said grabbing his dual bladed scythe, swinging it threatingly. "Sigma was at least loyal to his cause, he cared about his followers! You have made the mavericks kill themselves, along with the hunters! X, I don't care about myself anymore, I have been a burden to the hunters for too long and I will to repay them, I will do everything it takes to take out your lacky, and then you are next." Reaver's eyes show a dramatic emotion and his heart beats fast. "One last strike, then all this will be over, finally."
Jet quickly overcame the shock that they'd be fighting X and Zero. However, instead of fighting together X seemed to be sitting back and ordering Zero to kill them, this would be his undoing. "We've gotta keep him on his toes," Jet whispered as Zero came at them, "None of us can beat him alone but if we attack from every angle, never giving him a moment's rest we might get a lucky hit in." With that he pulled out his sabers and met Zero head on. Even with two blades, Zero was far more skilled. Jet had to use everything he had and more to parry the blows. Finally Zero simply kicked him in the chest, knocking him away just in time to block an overhead swing from Reaver. Flash and Abyss appeared behind Zero and launched tires and drills at him. Sensing this Zero backflipped them allowing Reaver to take damage from the tire. Meanwhile Jet had lowered his buster to the ground and began shooting scarabs into it, he knew this trick didn't work when Zero had fought Spread but things were a bit different now, he didn't know they were there...
Jet dashed once more at Zero, this time hurling both of his sabers at his back. Zero whirled around and knocked these sabers away. He ran at Jet who was suddenly weaponless but Flash leaped in his path and began dueling with him. Zero's saber landed a glancing blow on Flash's leg causing him to drop his guard. Fortunately Reaver was back and slightly enraged, sending more force into his blows. Zero was taken back for a second at the ferocity of this attack but soon gained the upper hand again. Suddenly Reaver leaped back and Zero realized all too late that Abyss had been behind him charging a huge blast. He tried to evade but Jet hovered above blasting him with Inundation. Along with moderate damage, Zero lost his footing giving Abyss the opportunity he needed. The blast hit Zero full on sending him into the wall. The wall buckled under his impact. Zero dropped to the ground, a little winded but ready to continue.
Zero leapt into the air and brought his saber down towards Abyss. Abyss sidestepped Zero's attack but his second slash hit him, knocking him away. As he hit the floor, Abyss saw Flash and Jet double team Zero. They were able to keep him busy for a time, then Flash was kicked in the chin and sent reeling. Immediately, Zero thrust his saber at Jet but Reaver stepped in and knocked the blade away. While Zero was off balence, Flash regained his feet and the three launched a never ending wave of attacks, leaping over one another and striking as soon as the other had swung. Zero couldn't keep up and had to jump out of the fray. Meanwhile, Abyss took this chance to go into his Hell's Abyss form. When he landed Abyss began clawing at Zero, scratching at him with his new claws. Zero could only defend, could never find an opening to strike back. Abyss never planned on actually hitting him, he was pushing Zero towards the other three. When they saw the opening they nodded to each other. They charged their busters into one shot and fired at Zero's back. The shot destroyed his ponytail and pierced his armor, leaveing a gaping hole in his back. Abyss then grabbed Zero's sholders and jumped up into the air. When he reached the peak he flipped over and started spinning towards the ground. When he was close to the ground Abyss let go of Zero and threw him against the floor at termenal velocity. The room quaked with incredible power as Zero went head first into the ground. Abyss fell to the ground exahausted. "That had to hurt... more then my pain anyway..." gasped Abyss.
Reaver quickly dashed by Zero and activated his burn trusters engulfing Zero in massive flames. Everyone stared hopefully at the smoke hoping their attacks had done him in. But then Zero dashed out of the smoke. He coughed and yelled furious, with Reaver and dashed towards him It scared the hell out of Reaver and in an act of instinct, he blasts the saber right out of Zero's hands with telekinesis. The saber flew through the room and stuck to the wall. But Zero didn't stop. He jumped on Reaver and began punching his head again and again. Jet wasn't one to watch as his friend was beaten up, he flew into Zero's back sending him flying into the wall. Before Zero could get up, Jet, Flash and Abyss fired the tundra beam at him, freezing him in a large block of ice near the wall. Jet knew that it wouldn't stop him and that he'd be free momentarily but it gave Reaver time to regain his feet and allowed the rookies to completely surround the block of ice. Zero was cornered.
Reaver got up, holding his head in his hand and trying to get steady. Upon his touch, his helmet crumbled into nothing. "Ugh, that guy hits hard... I think I preferred the saber..." He said to himself. Then the block of ice began to glow with red energy, the Z-buster blew it apart and Zero was free. Reaver appeared behind Zero and grabbed his arms. "NOW GUYS! RIP HIM APART!" he yelled while Zero struggled to free himself, Reaver had a hard time restraining him. Jet snapped up his sabers and hurried over to the battle. Zero, being far stronger was able to flip Reaver over him and he hurled him at the oncoming hunters. Reaver slammed into Flash and both crashed to the floor. Jet was able to air dash over and Abyss also dodged their incoming friend. Still saberless, Zero whipped out the Z-Buster and fired everything he had at Jet who disappeared behind the beam. "NO!" yelled Abyss, who watched the blast helplessly. Zero made use of his distraction and punched him in the face, he landed near Flash and Reaver and the three struggled to their feet. "Jet is dead, and so are all of you," Zero laughed, pointing his buster at the group. Zero's buster arm suddenly fell to the floor. "You mean this Jet," Jet sneered from behind Zero, "The Jet you missed!" He kicked Zero on his face, once again surrounded by the hunters. "Alright, lets end this," Jet said with a look of grim determination on his face.
Zero panted, clearly exhausted. "So....I failed....Heh heh heh heh....It doesn't matter...I've been 'killed' before...I've seen hell, and it's nothing...compared to what I have faced...And now, it's X's turn...." He collapsed on the ground defeated. "Hmmmm...I see I underestimated you all," came X's voice. "No matter, you won't last long against me. Why do you think I let Zero fight you all at once? To weaken you....to ensure I would win. And now, it is time for me to kill you all." X rose from his throne and stepped down to the rookies. Abyss stood up straight and calmly said, "Our job...your job...was to destroy any mavericks that threatened humans or uninfected reploids. You have done what Sigma has done, but unlike him, you don't have two lives. You could of just faked your death but you had to do the stupid thing and betray the very people you have trained. Poor, poor choice..." Jet was about to join in when the blue liquid seeping out of Zero started to bubble. It erupted suddenly taking the shape of Zero. "I told you I've been killed before... I've seen hell, and it's nothing... compared to what I have faced, there is nothing more you can do to me." The puddle stepped forward and just as everyone thought they'd have to fight Zero again, it collapsed on the ground with a splash, once again resuming its liquid form. "Very good," X laughed, "You've managed to take down the Class A hunter Zero. Saved me the trouble of doing so myself, he was starting to fight my control in the end. And now you get to face me, the father of all reploids and soon to be ruler of a utopia." X eyed the hunters, nursing their battle scars from Zero. "I won't need any armor other than this for my fight." he said mockingly, standing in his regular battle armor. Then he charged his buster and leaped into the air..
As X fired his charge shot the rookies took off in different directions. Flash and Jet were the first to recover. They dashed at X and began to swipe at him as he easily evaded their intended blows. He didn't notice Abyss behind him until he grabbed X's hands, as he did so the others began blasting him. X kicked Abyss in the leg and used this guard break to whip his around using Abyss to take a few of the shots. When the rookies ceased firing X pushed him back and shot him in the chest. His companions charged forward, slashing him furiously. "MOVE IT!!!" screamed Abyss who was back on his feet. Everyone dove out of the way except X who was shocked that Abyss was up and fighting again. The blast engulfed X. When the smoke cleared he was barely scratched. X laughed. "You really think I would be hurt by that? If so, you have already lost this fight." X dashed towards Abyss and uppercut him so hard he smacked into the ceiling. As X battled Jet, Abyss dropped down and drove his sword into X's arm. X whirled around and backhanded him with his buster cannon."HOW DARE YOU!!!!" X's arm hung limply, but he could fight just as well with one arm. He turned and blasted Flash as he ran forward. Flash landed in a smoking heap on the ground. "Don't forget me," he whispered as his eyes closed...
Glaring hatred at X, Abyss spoke up. "You are weak, X. You used the reason everyone called you a hero as an excuse to cause so much death. You're pathetic." X whinced at these words. While Abyss taunted X, Jet had snuck up behind him, he swung his sword overhead but X, sensing this, leaped away. Unfortunately he jumped right into Reaver's path. Reaver swung the icy end of his scythe into X's arm, paralyzing it. Unfortunately this was again, his normal arm and his gun arm was still fine. X retaliated by smacking Reaver in the face with the barrel. X whirled around, fixing his buster on the onrushing Abyss. "Bye bye," he jeered, taking aim and charging a massive shot. WABOOOMMMM!! The scarabs Jet had planted during the fight with Zero had detonated themselves under X's feet. "Its... not fair.." he whispered as he sank to his knees and slumped to the ground.
"Holy crap," whispered Jet, "We got him!" "Not quite," snapped X using a subtank. "Its over! Reaver held up a small item in his hand. "I know this won't kill him but it will at least weaken him enough to ensure victory. I think..." Then he yells at X, turning him from Jet. "X, YOUR TIME IS NEAR!" Then he begins to run toward him. "You're trying to beat me by yourself now? With what? That toothpick!?" X laughs as he rushes for Reaver. The two collided and X heard a small beeping noise. He looked down at the small object that was attatched to his torso. "What the hell is that!?" X yells. "I think it's called a bomb.." Reaver grins. "WHAT!? BUT, HOW!?" "I did not came from our base empty handed you idiot." X grabs Reaver in an armlock, and holds him as a shield. "THEN I MIGHT AS WELL TAKE YOU WITH ME!" X yelled furious. He then turns to Jet. "Don't do anything stupid or your friend is history..." X threatens. "Don't f*ckin worry about me!" Reaver yelled, "KILL HIM!"
Jet knew the bomb could blow at any time but he didn't care. Racing forward he pried Reaver away from X and pushed him away as the bomb blew. It shattered X's armor as he fell against the wall, bare wires were exposed and his internal components were badly damaged. X glared up as his armor lay in pieces around him, "I hope you don't think this is over yet." As he said this he pulled another subtank out and used it, within seconds the bleeding stopped and the wires snapped back into place. His armor fragments reassembled themselves onto his body. X stood up and brushed the dirt off. "Heh, enough of round one," he called as he summoned his ultimate armor. In a white flash he stood, stronger than he was before.
END OF CHAPTER 16
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Post by swimstud600 on Nov 6, 2006 2:50:16 GMT -5
-Meanwhile- In the corner Zero stirred slightly, he was still unconcious and his repair systems were working all out to restore functionality. Adding to his damage a recent blast had slowed his system down and backlogged his still unconcious mind with error reports.
X, in his ultimate form seemed almost god-like. Abyss felt something, a...light.... He touched it and felt the weapons he gained from the maverick leaders being depleated. He felt an immense power surging through him and an aura of light surrounded him. When the light went away, Abyss reappered with white armor where it was black, and black where it was blue. He even had angelic wings with black bones. He held in his hand a glowing blade the same length as him, but it could be swung as if it were made of nothing. "Whoa....When did I get this? Oh well, if it helps kill X, I'm not complaining..." He rushed at X, swung his sword, and slashed his chest. It shouldn't have been able to scratch the ultimate armor but it did. The hyper modes were evidently powerful.
Jet saw the ultimate armor and knew he would be torn apart as he was, no question in his mind. Then he remembered what Alia had told him and chose to sacrifice his weapon energy. Spikes began to emerge from his arms, his buster grew massive and his swords gleamed with a new aura as blue smoke rose to the ceiling. "So," he thought, "This is hyper mode.." He stood for a moment admiring his new body and watching X and Abyss dual. Then he leaped into the fray.
Reaver gazed at the continuing fight and actuvated his radio. "Yo, Flare... You listening?" "Loud and clear, Reaver. What do you want?" "What else did you gave me besides that bomb?" "You already used it? That should've blown him up!" "Not exactly..." ''Well, you have another something... But it's dangerous." "Oh do tell..." "If you activate hyper mode, you'll turn kinda... suicidal." "My hypermode is emo!?" "Nonono, you'll go berserk and gain strength, you also lose any fear of pain. But I don't know if you can distinguish friend or foe in that state..." "One way to find out I guess." "What!? Don't you dare try it! You-" Reaver broke the connection and immediatly activated hyper-mode. As soon as it activated, Reaver became different. His eyes turned red and he started screaming like one enraged. When he finished he lunged at X, throwing someone out of the way on his way over. X, who was focused on Jet didn't notice Reaver as he slammed him on the ground until it was too late. Reaver jumped on top of X and like Zero did to Reaver, Reaver himself now started to hit X in the head with his fists while screaming and grunting hystericaly.
Abyss landed near Flash and decided to use his only subtank on his fallen friend. Flash's eyes flickered open. "I am...alive?" he asked. Abyss nodded. Flash carefully got to his feet and observed the battle. Then he transformed into his hyper mode as well and the 2 rejoined the battle.
X had decided enough was enough, he was tired of being the punching bag. He kicked Reaver off of him who crashed into the far wall, clearly stunned. X charged a full power shot and fired it, the discharged plasma shot crackled as it sailed through the air and exploded onto the ground leaving tiny crackling balls of plasma energy there for a few seconds, the hunters dodged quickly knowing what the shot would do if it hit directly.
X hovered in the air facing all the rookies. "45% life remaining before critical damage is dealt ," he said quietly to himself. "NOVA STRIKE!!" Immediately a massive aura erupted from X's armor and engulfed him completely, the aura grew to a massive level and changed color from it's typical gold to a midnight black with blue lightning bolts crackling inside it. The aura itself was slightly smaller than the room, X laughed menacingly, "DODGE THIS," he yelled and continued to laugh as the massive wall of energy sped forward.
Reaver woke up, his hypermode apperantly had calmed down a bit. But as soon as he opened his eyes, he saw the powerfull aura coming near... "O shi-!" he cried as he was engulfed in energy. After it ended his body could be seen laying on the floor smoking. "Ugh.... I'm okay.." he muttered before losing consciousness.
Abyss knew a technique called the Heavenly Blast that he used to slow down the Nova Strike for a moment, Jet and Flash used that time to scramble to the other side of the room before they too were hit. When they looked back, both of their companions were down, having taken the full force of X's attack. Jet looked at Flash, pressing his subtanks into his hands. "I'll hold him off, you go heal Reaver and Abyss." Flash pushed the subtanks back at Jet, "No, you go heal them, I've got more health, being offline gave me time to re-energise." Jet would have argued more but X had fired another charge shot at the pair and the had to dash away. Flash leaped over to X and the two began dualing with their sabers. Jet rushed over and had time to heal Abyss and Reaver. Then the three ran back to the battle.
X's armor had seen better days but it kept together as X continued. The four rookies attacked relentlessly. Regardless, X would not go down that easily. X leapt into the air and fired a few scarabs at Abyss who began shooting them with as they came at him. X quickly landed fired a green spinner, a few magnet mines and a huge load of homing torpedos which bore down on Abyss. X charged his speed burner and let go as the flames detonated the explosives, setting them off. X landed away from the explosion and turned his attention to the next hunter. As Flash came running up, he opted instead for driving his knuckles into Flash's face and placing his buster next to his chest, fired a blast of electric spark and lightning web.
-Meanwhile- At hunter base Alia was typing furiously. The tension was high as the hunters at based waited to see their fate. Alia wasn't waiting, she wanted to know what was going on. Finally she broke the computer defences and hacked into the cameras. As she called them on, the raging battle came into focus. "Oh my God!" Alia cried. "X, what are you doing ALIVE?" she sobbed. Everybody else stood speechless, all they could do was watch in muted silence as the battle continued. Finally one hunter spoke up. "Look Alia, it's Zero" he said, pointing to Zero's body lying on the ground, face down with blaster marks all over him. Immediately Alia radioed Zero, "Zero come in!"
Jet looked at the TV with Alia's face. "Alia! X went maverick, he's not on our side anymore, he's AAARG!!!" X took advantage of the distraction and blasted him across the room. Before Jet hit the wall however, his new armor reacted sending flame jets out the back and slowing his impact. Jet hovered inches from the wall. "Ok, lets see what this new armor can do," he thought, pushing off the wall and engaging his giga attack. X responded by activating his own, the two blurs sped at one another meeting with a loud blast which echoed throughout the chamber. Backing up, the two slammed into each other once more. Reaver looked up wondering why Jet seemed to be holding the upper hand, X's form should've been stronger. Then he realized, X's form wasn't built for the air, Jet's giga attack had incredible power. Eventually Jet broke through sending X flying into the wall. At that moment Jet ran out of energy for his giga power and collapsed on the ground, it had clearly cost him a lot to hold X off who had far more energy for his powers.
Abyss looked up from the floor. He watched Reaver and Flash attack X in unison in attempt to defend Jet. Abyss was badly damaged, he began muttering to himself, "Heh heh heh heh...I'm pretty useless now, aren't I? Can barely walk, much less fight...hmmmm...I see now... what *cough* needs to be done..." Abyss used his last subtank to ease the pain and enable full movement again. Abyss walked toward the fight, but Reaver stopped him. "What do you think you are doing? You're in no condition to fight at all! If you go over there, you WILL die." Abyss didn't look back at him. "....I know." Abyss dashed towards X and uppercut him sky high. Abyss jumped and latched onto X. "I know I'm going to hell, but if I must go, you're coming with me." In midair, Abyss exploded. All anybody could hear was X's agonizing screams. What was left of Abyss and X fell to the ground in a smoking heap. X coughed up blood, tried to get up, and saw the others standing nearby ready to continue. He struggled to push himself up but his arm had no strength left. "I...l-lost?" he asked quietly.
X coughed more blood then collapsed to the ground. Suddenly the communications cleared up, the interference was gone. Over the com everyone heard, "Zero wake up!!" There was a low moan and Zero rolled over. "Ow my frigging head, what happened? Wait, where am I?" he asked looking around. Suddenly Zero spotted X laying in a heap in a pool of blood and scrap. Zero's eye's glazed for a second as the sight of X triggered a memory.
--------------------------- Zero was laying in his room, it'd been a rough week. They'd just killed Sigma again, it was the 12th time. Zero had noticed a change in X's behaviour ever since the fight ended, X was more agressive, rougher, even to the point of being rude... Quite unlike X, Zero thought to himself. Zero rolled over to sleep like he normally did. As he was drifting off his door opened, sitting up quickly he glared at the intruder. "Huh? Who is it?" he asked as his vision came into focus again. He could make out the form standing before him, "Oh it's you X, can't it wait till tomorrow, whatever you need?" "No Zero, it can't," X said. He reached out and grabbed Zero's head. A large mass of energy passed from X's hand into Zero's head, as soon as it happened Zero lost conciousness. 8 hours later Zero woke up wondering what happened. He remembered X had come to visit him, but for some reason he couldn't remember what was said. Deeming it unimportant Zero continued along his day. He was in the middle of dispatching a maverick when suddenly his head lit up with intense pain and he heard X's voice in his head. From there Zero lost all conciousness... ---------------------------
Zero leapt to his feet. "X, you bastard!" Zero shouted. X looked up, Zero was awake and X suddenly realised his control was slipping. In his weakened condition he wouldn't be able to maintain control over the powerful Zero. The reborn Zero however was in full control, completely revitalised and pissed to boot. X struggled to get up but Zero was already there. Zero's first punch staggered X further, the second split X's armor as he tried to block the enraged Zero. Zero snapped up his fallen saber. A few slashes with it reduced X's armor to small pieces, Zero kicked the weak X across the room and started focusing his power, pushing it into his sword, the beam surged up into a 10 foot blade. Zero swing the sword. It struck X ripping every bit of armor off, melting his internal metal and fusing one of his eyes shut. His wires crackled and his limbs hung weakly in jagged pieces. Zero's rage cooled and he stood back. X looked up to Zero, face melted and armor destroyed. "S-sorry... Zero..." he said at last. "I don't have much time left but I want you to know what happened... During the last fight between Sigma, do you remember when Sigma shot me with that wierd beam he carried and how easily I brushed it off? It wasn't meant to kill me, it injected me with a new hybrid virus designed by Sigma specifically for me. Somehow he'd found a way around my immunity systems." X paused, chocking on tears. "I'm sorry Zero, I couldn't stop myself... I was too weak to stop him.."
Zero knelt down beside his fallen friend. "No," he said, "It wasn't your fault, you didn't fail anyone..." He was suddenly too overcome with emotion to speak. X closed his eyes and whispered his final words, "All of you must never let this happen again, fight for the future... and each other..."
-Weeks later- After X died Reaver regrouped with Flare and ordered their own forces back but the two continued to stay at MHHQ for a time. When the funeral for X was held, there was much mourning. Alia sobbed in the front row, Zero spoke of X's courage and valor and goodness. But the shock of legendary maverick hunter X's death slowly faded and life returned to normal. He would never be forgotten but the hunters knew they had to get on with their lives.
Jet walked with Flare and Reaver to the front of MHHQ. "So you're not staying with us?" he asked. "Nah, we'll go our own way from here," Reaver replied. "Don't worry though, we won't go Maverick." Flare added. "Well, I guess we can trust you, thanks for all your help." "Not a problem." Reaver replied. He shook Jet's hand, as did Flare and the three exchanged their farewells. "So, where are we going now?" Reaver wonders. "Dude, you're asking me!?" Flare starts to laugh. "Let's just head back to our lab, we'll see what we can do there." Reaver decided. The two gave Jet a salute, turned and headed back to where they came from...
Jet turned around and headed back into MHHQ. He'd found a place to belong and a place where was needed. He would honor X's dying wish and destroy any maverick, fighting for everlasting peace...
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Post by swimstud600 on Nov 6, 2006 2:52:07 GMT -5
Lack of comments is kind of depressing. So what'd you guys think? 17 chapters, some cool fights and great character depth. I've got some ideas, I'll probably make some follow up stories.
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Post by Drayconis on Dec 23, 2006 0:35:18 GMT -5
a little late, but i havent visited the fanfic section in awhile, to depressing, but I LOVE that last chapter, and all the ones before it. very cool, and i look forwward much so to future works
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Post by Subaru_kun on Apr 10, 2008 20:57:07 GMT -5
oo ooo! do i get to be in the story? if i do then: (i'd like to be coming in a little later) (a fresh new mind to the HQ) (completely relaxed,happy in combant,goes berserk when a close Friend is hurt badly/tortured) (Is great at utilizing the weapons gained from maverick generals,and good with using a saber, but is horrid at using busters) (loves looking at the sky) (many hoobies include:drawing, video games, simulation battles, 1 on 1 sparing, recon missions) (is freakisly tall) (has a friendly and good heart for other reploids) (cannot stand arguments) (has a crush O.O) (wants to one day be in X's maverick hunting squad) (posion has no effect on me) (Im secretly a human fused with biometal"optional thing to put in") ANd thats all my ideas if ya wanna put me in your story if you plan to do a second series. i wish the first one was kinda longer T_T
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Post by Professor Fann on Apr 10, 2008 23:25:04 GMT -5
Wasn't this thread long been not replied to? I wonder if Swim remembers this still ...
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Post by swimstud600 on Apr 11, 2008 1:34:50 GMT -5
Of course I remember it, there's a sequal started that I haven't worked on in forever because no one reads. And no you can't be in it, its over.
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