Mortalis High

[Drayconis]

My almost completely original (ok so i got the idea partly.. from manga like Tenjou and K-Fight... but the story and mechanics are very different...) story, using the forum RP is started (which promptly commited riutal suicde a month later) Screw it just enjoy.

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School had started a week ago. By now most people had fallen into last years routine. Some 1st years still ran around like headless chickens but for the most part school life was back.
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Bree Bree Bree Warning Warning, Wake Ness is Inevitable! Resistance is Futile!

Jace mumbled and rolled (literally) out of bed with a hump. He groaned, reached up and smashed his alarm clock until it stopped making the hateful noise telling him it was time to get up. "Fragging alarm, I must spend hundreds on the infernal devices..." He looks around the studio apartment, at the top of the mixed dorm. "Where's my damn coffee?"

"If your going to be like that you don't get any at all."

Jace looked over to see his girlfriend, Vivian Senner, standing there a pot of coffee in one hand and large mug in the other. "Hey! I wasn't dissing you.. Just the fact that I should wake up and be instantly caffinated."

"Hmm, I don't know." She says, smirking and taking a sip of coffee from the mug, leaving a faint pink outline on the rim of the mug.

"No!" he gargles out rolling over to her and grabbing the mug. He hisses slightly and takes a gulp of the hot beverage. "Ah, sweet relief. Sorry babe... You know how I am in the mornings."

She straightens her knee length night gown and laughs a bit, "Indeed I do, it's why your not wearing that coffee."

"Hey, joking about coffee is a serious crime." he says, taking a refill of the now downed mug. "I mean, it's the one perfect thing on this planet." He stops and withers slightly under her look. "All right, second perfect thing after you... For being able to make it." He gives her a quick kiss to the cheek before she sighs.

"Anyways, I have to head back to my room and get ready for school. See you in a bit." She says, and walks out of the penthouse apartment.

Jace blinks twice, drinks the rest of the coffee and flops into his chair. "Bah, getting ready is so over rated. I mean why do you.. Gotta... Get... For.. CRAP I'm gonna be late!" He jumps up and rushes across the studio apartment to his dresser grabbing random clothes, he quickly gets dressed then looks at himself in the mirror.

He looks at himself wearing an orange and purple polka dot t-shirt, Hawaiian shorts and 2 different color socks. "Ok, lets try this again.. Slower..." He walks back to the dresser, picks out some more clothes and puts them on. He looks in the mirror again, this time wearing a navy blue t-shirt, with one of his custom logos on it, over top a white long sleeved shirt, and blue jeans.

He smiles in triumph and slings his laptops carrying case over his neck, double checking to make sure he didn't require any extra text books. Sure he was ready he heads out the door to teh elevator.
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Across the courtyard in the boys only dorm...

The Sleeper Has Awakened!

Sim sat up with a start as his "Dune" alarm clock went off. He mumbled a bit got dressed, grabbed his back back and bamboo sword then left his tiny room on the third floor of the dorm. He went next door and kicked it in. Walked over to the beds occupant and kicked him. "Dray, get up. Time to get ready." The larger student moans and kicks Sim back.

"Bah." He mumbles something unintelligible and gets up, still dressed in yesterdays outfit. He sniffs his hoodie and shrugs, "Meh, good for another day." He walks over and picks up his Peruvian Guinea Pig from its cage. He takes the small black rodent gives him a bit of food then sets him down in the hood of his hoodie. he grabs his shoulder bag (with boxing gloves tied around where the strap meets the bag) and looks at Sim. "Lets go then."

They both make it to the front door where Ray is waiting for them. "Good grief you guys take long to get ready. Let's go already!"

Dray back hands the younger student,"Don't sass your betters kid."

Ray tries to duck unsuccessfully and gets his head jerked forward, throwing him off balance. He stumbles forward and into Zack Korrell, a member of the student enforcement squad "Heaven's Judgment."

Zack had been yelling at someone in his room when Ray slammed head first into him. "Hey! Watch where your going miscreant!" He says, pushing Ray out of his way. He turns a deep shade of red when the person in his room walks out, shirt-less and wearing Zack's pants.

Kris Lathurn, resident man-whore, looks at the group. "Oh hey! Groups are always fun to-"

Zack clamps a hand over Kris' mouth. Sim just about dies from laughter, "Hah! Not 10 days into the new year and Law boy is breaking the no students over rule..."

"Hey! He was drunk and needed a place to stay, So like the pal i am i helped him out. not that you twerps would know anything about that. Loyalty and such." Zack replies harshly.

Sim just gives him a sarcastic look, "Yeah. Sure, even if that's the case that means you tolerate under age drinking on school grounds."

Zack turned an even deeper shade of red and was about to respond when David Nestrom, Senior student, member of the student council, and second-in-command of the Enforcers. Walks up and sighs. He shoots Zack a look then turns to Sim, "I'm sure he had a good reason. And you shouldn't undermine the authority of your seniors."

Sim just about chokes,"ha! under-"

Dray cuts him off, with his signature back hand. Grabbing both Ray and Sim by their collars he looks apologetic at David, "Sorry about them. Young and dumb."

David nods in appreciation at the older student, appreciating that even though he was the 'enemy' he had good common sense not let his charges run around. "Thanks Dray. See ya in class later."

Dray nods and heads out of the building. David turns to Zack, "And in teh future.. Try to have more discretion."

Zack sighs and finally releases Kris. As David leaves Kris looks at Zack, "Was that about something I did?"

Zack just clutches his forehead and sighs.

[swimstud600]

This is among the best writing I've seen you do. Either means you put more passion into this, you worked harder at editing or crap, you've just gotten better. More.

[Drayconis]

Chapter 2:

Jace runs into the elevator gets in and sighs. He watches as the floor counter drops a couple numbers, and the doors open up. He smiles as Vivian walks in and gives him a flirtatious glance

"You clean up nice." She says drawing close to him.

He shrugs, "I try." He says giving his best mock arrogant smile.

As the door opens about halfway down, Lynne Rindahl walks in, wearing a to slinky red dress over top of a pair of to tight jeans, over all leaving very little to an active imagination. Vivian shoots her an icy glare. Lynne just looks at her, "My my, a little chilly today isn't it?"

Jace shoots Lynne a cold look of his own. "I dunno, I found it quite warm in my room. Well, I do get heating in there after all. I guess the middle dorms don't? You should sleep with some higher class people next time."

She glares back, knowing full well he knew her room was on that floor."I would, but it seems someone already beat me to it. Making the rounds of the upper floors again, Senner?"

Lynne flashed a sickly sweet smile in Vivian's direction, sidling slightly to keep Jace in between her and her sniping target.

"No, Rindahl, I'm confident enough to be satisfied with one guy, thanks."

Vivian kept her face impassive, determined to not let the slut get a rise out of her, and hoping against hope that Jace would do the same. Slim hope mind you if she knew her boyfriend.

Jace opened his mouth while raising his hand... Just as the elevator stops again. The door opens, and a teen holding (and reading) a newspaper walks in. Doors close behind him. He folds up his newspaper and looks at who's in the elevator.

"Oh bloody hell." Says Bek, looking around. The leader of teh student Enforcers, Heaven's Judgment, and teh student council president, did NOT like Jace nor Vivian.

Happy to have some parity, Lynne pounces on Bek, hugging him fiercely."Becky, how nice of you to join us!"

Lynne shoots a 'You have yours, I have mine.' look at Viv.

Vivian merely narrows her eyes, using all her willpower to keep from attacking Lynne. Jace sighs and wraps his arm around Vivian, kissing her on the head and smiles.

"Well, at least your guy is better looking." He says to Vivian grins widely at this and looks Bek in the eyes.

"SO Becky boy, Fabricated any lies about me this year? Or waiting for me to actually break one of your so called laws? Hmm, either way I suppose you'll be after me soon... Until then," He pauses as the elevator comes to a stop on the ground floor.

"You and the communal girlfriend have some fun eh? Chow!" He laughs, holding Vivian while walking out of the elevator and out of the dorm.

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Outside the dorm he bumps into Dray holding Sim and Ray. "Hey Dray.. Trouble in Dorms already?"

Dray drops his two charges and sighs, "Almost. Idiot one and idiot two here were about to pick a fight with Zack and David."

Both Sim and Ray cringe as Dray tells this, knowing what was about to happen. Sure enough, WHACK to teh back of their heads. Jace rubs his hands, "Are you idiots! Don't answer that... HJ is hounding us enough as it is, we don't want to provoke them! Well.. Yet..."

Vivian just shakes her head, "John, Raymond, you should both know better by now."

Sim shoots her another 'Don't call me John!' look and slouches, knowing what his seniors, and friends, were saying was true.

Ray just spins his long staff in his hands twirling it about changing the patterns of the wood and metal.

The five changed subjects to their classes as they drew closer to the 3 school buildings, splitting up for their classes.

Behind them aways Lynne was trying to comfort a barely held back Bek Storm.

"C'mon Becky, don't let them get to you. Your better then they are. You do have the law on your side."

He sighed and calmed down a bit, "Yeah yeah.. I know your right. It's just that damn Keller is so irritating! He openly mocks the law of the school. Actively resisting the student enforcers at all turns... He even carries a gun in that bag! But his adoptive family has connections or something.. It's why that hooligan lives in teh nicest apartment on teh school grounds, and I, teh Student Council President, leader of Heaven's Judgment am stuck on teh lower levels! I even have a roommate for crying out loud! Mind you, I could be stuck in the guys Only Dorm."

Lynne nudges his shoulder while winking, "Well, that would suck now wouldn't it?"

He laughs and shrugs, "Indeed it would. But things are fairly nice as it is I guess..." He straightens out his white leather jacket, a black phoenix emblazoned on the back, and stretches. "I'll nail him one of these days, and It'll be a sweet, sweet day when i do."

He kisses Lynne goodbye as they split up heading to different buildings for their respected classes.


(If you have any particular ideas for a highschool character, who can fight and possibly die horribly, lemme know Its hard to fill a school with just a few characters.)

[Drayconis]

Ask an ye shall recieve....

[swimstud600]

Well like I said, you can use Jet, Tank, Swim and Sub if you like. I've got alot of characters actually if you need more.
Didn't enjoy this one as much as Ch 1 but still good. Hopefully more of a general plot emerges though or it'll start to get dull.
Oh and I'm almost afraid to ask but does this mean you're abandoning your other projects? RMZR2 and that comic about Bass?

[Drayconis]

Chapter 3

Jace and Vivian split from the rest, heading to Building Three where the Language Arts wing was located. They got in as the 20 minute early warning bell went off. Jace looks around at teh relatively empty corridor, noting no one of current interest. He looks at Vivian, "So, 20 minutes, Ideas until then?"

Vivian just shrugged "Just hang here and wait?" She says mildly apathetic.

As they arrive in front of their class Jace just nods, "Aight, we'll just hang." He says looking at her, simply happy to be alive... Right up until that cold chill of fear ran down his spine, that chill that signifies something really bad is about to happen. The kind you get before your girlfriend dumps you, or you find out your husband is cheating on you with a younger or woman.. Or worse yet, pop quiz.


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Down the hallway, one of the "no one of interest" group, wishes he had slept in for another 10 minutes. Rion had just transferred to Mortalis this year and still felt fairly out of it. He'd grasped that the school was fairly split between 2 groups. The student Enforcers and this.. 'Hell's Wrath' He hated politics and was hoping to avoid being caught up in the schools. Unfortunately for him life sucks and nothing ever goes as planned. But thats for later... By interesting enough coincidence he to was in Jace and Vivian's Japanese class, he decided to head over and go read a book in class or something.

Back to the interesting group.

Jace looked up, still slightly shaken from the weird chill when he heard something that chilled him even more.

"Jaaaaace-kun!"

He turns in near mute horror as his young adoptive Japanese sister runs to him. She gives him a huge hug then leans up and gives him a quick kiss on the lips. He steps back more out of self-defense then anything stammering, "Addy? What are you doing here?"

She smiles and shows off her student ID badge, showing: Adrianna Keller. "Just transferred!" She says happily.

Jace pauses, "Umm, Addy isn't your last name Sonada? Keller is my last name." Now worried, Jace steps back again trying to distance himself.

She laughs and comes in close to him Not about to let him escape which is exactly what the look in his eyes said he wanted to do. "I had it changed, yea know, figured I'd get to that step of the process sooner."

Jace looks at her, cold sweat running down his back, eyes wide, "W-whatya me-"

He gets interrupted as the younger girl looks at Vivian coldly, "So? Who's this? Friend of yours?"

Vivian's eye twitched involuntarily, IN the last 2 minutes a good looking girl, who's she never seen nor HEARD of before suddenly appears and hugs and kisses HER boyfriend on the lips, announcing she changed her last name to "skip ahead in the process"

She glares at the impudent little wretch, cold hatred dripping from her voice, "I happen to be his girlfriend. And Who may you be?" She left the 'bitch' unsaid, but a smart observer could tell it was there.

Jace, in his silent horror, slowly watched his sex life dissappear from before his eyes.

"I'm his Fiance'! Thats who Bitch!" Addy just about screams at Vivian, leaving the bitch very said.

Jace, in a desperate attempt to salvage something tries to calm his Addy down, "Now, Addy I ne-"

She just shoves him out of her way growling, "Oh shut it, your no longer needed for this."

She steps forward to Vivian, "So Bitch, you think you can steal my husband from me while I'm gone?"

Jace moans again and tries to step between the two only to find his feet, quite literally frozen to teh ground.

"I SAID you're not needed right now! So SHUT. UP." Addy says icily to him.

At this point the God's apparently decided to cut Jace a little slack as Rion with a Ki enforced kick snaps teh Ice holding Jace in place and drags him off to the side. "Hey pal, we may wanna move. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned eh?" He says to Jace.

Jace looks at him in gratitude, "You have no idea..."

Vivian, in a total rage steps forward, "HUSBAND?!?" She practically screeches at teh offending woman.

"I Didn't steal anything! You never had him to begin with you delusional freak!" As she says this she drops into an offensive stance.

"Delusional? ME?" Addy says taking a chain out of her back pack slowly starting to swing it. "I'm not the one who tried to sleep with a practically married man!"

Jace beside Rion moans again at this comment. Rion just grabs his shoulder, "Hey Man, I'm sure it'll be all right... Well.. Actually I can't see how that may work. Your probably screwed."

Jace shoots Rion a look, "You really need to work on those comforting skills you know that pal?"

Addy meanwhile decides to take teh first move swinging her chain toward Vivian, while screaming, "C'mon Slut! bring it!"

As the fight ensue a large crowd starts to gather, and David, who also has Japanese pushes his way through teh crowd, ending up beside Jace and Rion. He clears his throat, "Is there anything wrong here?" He says loudly enough for all but the two engrossed combatants to hear.

Both Jace and Rion shoot him looks at that, "No, every thing is all right, peachy even!" Jace says sarcasm dripping from his voice.

Rion just gestures, "I kinda figure it would be obvious to see whats going on..."

Back in the fight, Vivian kicks out with her left foot, catching Addy in the stomach. She grins, mentally noting it was a good thing she wore her steel toed runners today. She brings up her right hand to block the chain.

Addy, grunts in pain and sees Vivian about to block the chain, she smiles and twitched her hand, changing the direction of the chain sending it straight into Viv's chest. With her other hand, she grabs Vivian out stretched foot and starts freezing it.

David steps back and says, "They get 10 minutes..."

Jace swore, while he wasn't about to risk his neck stepping into that fight he had hoped David would. "Well David... For once I wish you'd intervened in a fight, on teh other hand I can under stand not wanting to stick your hand in a blender. A rather violent blender, with chains and steel toed boots."

Rion sighs, "I just don't see this ending well..."

Vivian manages to grab the chain, before the blade hits her in the chest and throw it back at Addy, using the fact she's now anchored TO Addy she swings her other foot in an attempt to hit Adrianna in the temple.

David looks at Jace, "Interesting choice in words..." Putting away his book, he glanced over at Jace while still paying attention to the fight. "I'm hoping they'll tire themselves out quickly. Otherwise I will have to step in." He sighed. "I'd really prefer to not have to do something like this so early in the day."

Addy jerks her head back, and sending another tremor through teh chain sending the blade straight into Vivian's leg. She then twists sending Vivian into the nearest wall.

Vivian hits the wall with a solid thunk, not crashing through it due to the reinforcement that was installed after the first year the school opened, and had to have hundreds of walls rebuilt due to similar accidents.

The wind knocked out of her due to the impact, Vivian still manages to use the rebound to flick her injured foot into Addy's other temple, doubling the effects of the previous strike.

As Addy starts to sway from the probable double concussion, Jace takes this time to step in. "HEY! Both of you Settle!"

Addy starts to fall a bit and Jace grabs her and pins her to the wall, with one flick he removes the offending blade from Vivian's leg. Addy attempts to protest, "But, But she.. That Bitch.."

Jace fumes and slaps her across the face. "Settle! NOW!" As the last blow hits she starts to crumple slightly, Jace sighs and motions at Rion, "You, grab her and take her to the infirmary, if you don't know where that is follow me." He says handing Addy to Rion and lifting up Vivian effortlessly, he turns to David, "Could you let the teacher know we'll be late for class? Or At least I will, I dunno about these 2..." Without waiting for a reply he hefts his girlfriend getting a more secure hold and heads off down the hall.(each building has an infirmary on every floor. They are almost always full...)

"Sure." Rion said. He carried Addy with both arms as he followed Jace towards the infirmary. "Oh...." He said to David, sounding obviously ticked as he just had to take several blows to the back because other fights began to form. "I would suggest you calm these guys down.... I'd rather not have to do it myself when I get back." He said, laughing a bit as he ran after Jace, still carrying Addy and basically shielding her from any blows that were miscalculated in the fights that were arising.

Catching her breath quickly, Vivian smiles weakly up at Jace in apology, puts a hand around his neck to help support herself, and then gives Addy a condescending glare of victory. She then glances at her own leg, the absorbent material of her blue tights rapidly turning purple with blood. Viv moves her other hand down to the wound and applies pressure to try to reduce the blood flow rather unsuccessfully.

David gave a slight glare in Rion's direction. He hated to admit it, but the guy was right. He should have stepped in sooner. Regardless, David's duty was to regain order. He made his way through the crowd, dodging random strikes as they flew out and taking down their owners with his own. He clenched one of his hands into a fist as the air around it began to smolder. Reaching the area with the most fighting going on, David slammed his fist into the ground. While it did no real damage to the floor, the force and flame caught everyone's attention.

"Everyone," David addressed the crowd as he stood up with a scowl, "go to your classrooms." Nobody moved, all eyes locked on David. Several of the students that were fighting looked unhappy and a few even seemed to be trying to find an opening to attack. David's scowl turned to a look of anger, his eyes practically aflame. "NOW!!" The students dispersed quickly, scrambling to their classes. David took one last look around the now deserted hall before entering his own classroom.

Bowing respectfully to the teacher, David brushed a few stray strands of hair out of his eyes. "I'm sorry to inform you that a few students will be arriving late. I'm sure you know which ones." As he took his seat, the teacher sighed and muttered. David only caught a few words of it but knew that it wasn't something that could be repeated in polite conversation.

[swimstud600]

So thats a yes to abandoning your other projects then?
As for that fight, I rather think both girls would have turned on Jace rather than going at each other, but then I've got no personal experience and can't say either way.

[Professor Fann]

Aha. I am rather pleased with this fanfiction so far. And here I should admit that this is much better than your previous projects of RMZ Remix and such. It is highly original and gives off a more human atmosphere, which is very pleasant. I like this series.

In your free time, update if you will.

[Bloodbane]

Meh..... It's more of an IFF, since he's basically just copied all the posts from his RP forum. XD -is RPing with him as I type this-

[swimstud600]

Yeah, I'm less impressed with it now that I know that. It can still be good though, its just going to require editing to change it from an RP into a story.

[Professor Fann]

Oh I see. That's unexpected. Well, I agree that Dray needs more editing to make the story better than expected. Or maybe some twists will do.

[Bloodbane]

Don't get me wrong.... I see some editing in there. But at the same time I recognize some of my old posts. lol.

[Professor Fann]

Let it be. Perhaps something good might come out of it, provided he does some creative changes for the overall plot.

[Drayconis]

bloodbane said:

Don't get me wrong.... I see some editing in there. But at the same time I recognize some of my old posts. lol.

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I cant help it if i wanna keep good writing. So sue me. Any posts kept intact are simply because i could not think of anything better. And its this point of the story where I plan on having the Story diverge from teh RP.. Mainly cause to much goes on in the RP to cover well. Anyways expect an update sometime before I leave town end of next week... Would've done it this week but i've had the flu.

[Bloodbane]

Lulz... k. Well that works, if you're really diverging from the story that is shown in the RP of course.