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Post by rioku on Dec 30, 2007 0:54:02 GMT -5
Is this a comic or manga? Cuz if its manga, you got a long way to go for this tyle to work. Honestly, the old guy looks creepy, the MC looks.....and the third looks like a normal amature drawing(Not saying there's anything wrong with it) Try watching more boondocks(Cuz I know you be watchin it, too...lol) and try to learn from the drawings of that.
Honestly, your ideas are really good, but if the art doesn't look right,.....well you'd still get alot of viewers, but I don't think people would take it seriously when certain situaions call for it, ya know? This looks like a comedy manga of some sort(and I mean 100% comedy with failing action...There's enough of that already)
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Post by Professor Fann on Dec 30, 2007 0:59:55 GMT -5
Which is why he is taking his own time to improve, and that manner of attitude is encouragable. But hopefully in the long run, this project doesn't get abandoned.
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Post by rioku on Dec 30, 2007 18:45:36 GMT -5
What manner of attitude, criticism? I didn't know criticism was allowed. my bad. I take everything back, and I shut my mouth.
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Post by Professor Fann on Dec 30, 2007 22:41:14 GMT -5
Criticism is allowed so long as it's progressive and not demeaning. The manner of attitude here is that Alter I beleive is taking his time to construct his comic. Improvements can be done over time. That I firmly believe is his stand.
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Post by Knuckles on Jan 16, 2008 13:33:50 GMT -5
Actually i've just been mad busy, and haven't had much time to work on things.. but i'm getting back on track when i get a wacom tablet this weekend (hopefully)
anyways, thanks for the crit. in response:
Is this a comic or manga? Manga Cuz if its manga, you got a long way to go for this tyle to work. yup i know that Honestly, the old guy looks creepy, That was the plan.. but lol i need to finish that sketch the MC looks..... yeah i felt the same.. it was over rushed and the third looks like a normal amature drawing(Not saying there's anything wrong with it) I tried keep him kinda plain, but again, it's a sketch Try watching more boondocks(Cuz I know you be watchin it, too...lol) and try to learn from the drawings of that. there's been no new episodes since christmas lol, and i'm trying not to jack a style too much Honestly, your ideas are really good, but if the art doesn't look right,..... yeah.. ii'm still perfecting my ideas well you'd still get alot of viewers, but I don't think people would take it seriously when certain situaions call for it, ya know? not sure i get you This looks like a comedy manga of some sort(and I mean 100% comedy with failing action...There's enough of that already) It's not a comedy. obviously there'll be aspects that are, but naw it's reasonably serious. I just happened to have sketched the funnier looking characters, and most of my drawing is done in class.. never really in my free time. I'm still messing with style of artwork, and improving my skills, and perfecting things... as for tone though, it's more afro samurai kinda seriousness.. so comedy, and story etc..
oh and i have no problem with criticism so keep up.
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