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Post by Subaru_kun on Apr 23, 2008 20:02:39 GMT -5
after viewing tony's collection of cards,i was very intregued, so i asked tony where and how he made these cards, and so i decided that as a token of fanboy-ism to tony,i would create a card collection spot as well. ill also take requests such as tony does. in this one ill try to suit cards to a catigory. my first one is Kingdom Hearts:
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Post by Professor Fann on Apr 23, 2008 23:26:14 GMT -5
Eh, what da ya know. They're not half bad.
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Post by Subaru_kun on Apr 24, 2008 18:02:32 GMT -5
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Post by Tony on Apr 24, 2008 18:32:36 GMT -5
Good... but the text doesn't resemble what you would see on a real Yu-Gi-Oh card. I suggest you work on that.
Other than that, they're ok.
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Post by Subaru_kun on Apr 24, 2008 20:03:20 GMT -5
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Post by Professor Fann on Apr 24, 2008 21:35:40 GMT -5
Eh ... the last few were not that surprising.
Use images of which no one will totally expect to appear. Something strange, but likeable and fits the card's content.
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Post by Ruinaru on Apr 24, 2008 22:08:23 GMT -5
Who's honestly gonna have two level 10 monsters to sacrifice to summon Final Form? Most ritual cards have you sacrifice monsters whose total level adds up to the level of the monster being summoned.
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Post by Subaru_kun on Apr 25, 2008 15:47:44 GMT -5
samus,you do have a point,but them why would i have made the final form atk and def 9999,a divine atribute and also an ultimate rare?
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Post by Tony on Apr 25, 2008 16:49:05 GMT -5
The text of your cards isn't accurate to the actual card game... and, in my opinion, that kinda ruin's their quality.
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Post by Subaru_kun on Apr 25, 2008 17:18:46 GMT -5
im never good with text.
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Post by Professor Fann on Apr 26, 2008 4:44:38 GMT -5
That doesn't mean that you shouldn't do something about it and still use the same poor reason to justify your future work's potential bad quality.
FIX YOUR ENGLISH.
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Post by R-Cubed on Apr 27, 2008 11:27:55 GMT -5
Try like this.
This card can only be ritual summoned by the effect of Final Retribution.
Send 2 level 10 or higher monsters from your hand or the field to the graveyard to ritual summon one Sora Final form from your hand.
You inspired me to try making cards agian.
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Post by Professor Fann on Apr 30, 2008 0:59:15 GMT -5
samus,you do have a point,but them why would i have made the final form atk and def 9999,a divine atribute and also an ultimate rare? I think you'd need to sacrifice more, much more cards just to summon that ultimate form. Or create more powerful cards and use less of them to summon the ultimate one.
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Post by Subaru_kun on May 2, 2008 14:30:21 GMT -5
alright,i get the point. An update will be coming soon.
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Post by MasterOmegaX on May 3, 2008 0:04:29 GMT -5
I'm not really gonna criticize because making these cards look more like a novelty than anything, but when you resize the images keep the size relative.
I hate seeing the picture too wide or too tall, I don't see how anyone doesn't notice how odd this looks.
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