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Post by Xzero on Jun 22, 2005 22:28:40 GMT -5
ok here we go my real comic its long so stay put  |
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Post by MasterOmegaX on Jun 23, 2005 1:18:42 GMT -5
There seems to be lots of errors in spelling. Then again, typing all that on mspaint which has no spell check, probably you would mess up.
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Post by Xero Bloodline on Jun 23, 2005 3:06:27 GMT -5
MoX is right, double check any kind of text you've got going in a comic. It helps to have somebody proof it for you. Also, remember what I told you, and I'm gonna tell everybody else too. This is Xzero's last chance at making a comic. If he only makes two or three then changes his mind, he's not posting anymore comics on ZV. I may not let him post anything at all. We're gonna see how good he really is at making comics. I've heard where this one is going, and it should be interesting. So lets hope we find out.
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Post by DarkZ on Jun 23, 2005 6:34:09 GMT -5
Keep doing this one vainstar. It seems okay, excep for the grammar errors which I have sometimes too but, keep at it. and don't quit in the middle of the way.
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Post by Netzuko Kymera on Jun 23, 2005 19:17:30 GMT -5
I hope this lasts more than 2 days lol.
Keep it up lil' dude! I'm right behind you if you need help!
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Post by Seven on Jun 23, 2005 19:47:24 GMT -5
Check the mouths of the sprites, they have to be opened when characters speak. And also... isnt't there a problem about the timeline? You know, X and Zero... 21XX... you being 13, 2005...
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Post by Netzuko Kymera on Jun 23, 2005 20:09:57 GMT -5
Gah! I forgot to mention that, oh well seven got it anyway.
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Post by Xzero on Jun 24, 2005 0:43:52 GMT -5
if you read it says he got flung into a portal which if you dont have a hint to the time during x1
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Post by Nightmare on Jun 24, 2005 0:50:09 GMT -5
This looks very interesting Xzero. I can't wait to see more.
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Post by Netzuko Kymera on Jun 24, 2005 11:28:34 GMT -5
If it's in X1, X should have his X1 colors and Zero should be in his X1 armor. To get the original X1 colors, get 1 seven's PD X poses at BnG and recolor it, the Zero X1 armor is in the first page of the PD sprite thread in BnG
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Post by Xzero on Jun 24, 2005 12:19:27 GMT -5
read, it said he got there when thirteen hes sixteen now, this is more like half way through x 3
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Post by Netzuko Kymera on Jun 24, 2005 14:04:45 GMT -5
Then X should still have the blue colors.
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Post by Nightmare on Jun 24, 2005 15:45:46 GMT -5
Listen, will you people lay off already? For god sakes he's only posted one comic and you already giving him s**t. Let him at least update before you vultures pick away his flesh. And why so literal? Who cares about the timeline? I got MMZ and MMX characters in the same room in my comic. And why are you complaining about X's colors!? For one, who cares!? And second, you haven't eve nseen X yet! I think this is Xzero's best idea yet, and I want to see more. Keep it up Xzero, I wanna see more.
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Post by DarkZ on Jun 24, 2005 16:36:30 GMT -5
I agree with nightmare. Give Xzero some credit ok? He's doing it ok and I see no problems why not continue. Keep it up Vainstar! Show us your skills. ^^
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Post by Nightmare on Aug 23, 2005 5:06:09 GMT -5
This is Xzero's last chance at making a comic. If he only makes two or three then changes his mind, he's not posting anymore comics on ZV. So much for that. |
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