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Post by ZeroX on Dec 29, 2004 21:59:53 GMT -5
yeah you use my guy iam making a hella better sheet in due time
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Post by Fusion on Dec 29, 2004 22:12:41 GMT -5
If you ask me, generic standing sprites don't make good sprites of characters lying on their backs.
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Post by Netzuko Kymera on Dec 29, 2004 22:16:06 GMT -5
sorry but i didnt have 1
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Post by Netzuko Kymera on Dec 31, 2004 10:06:11 GMT -5
wat's this no one replying? hhhhmmm? o well this will make you reply yay buster this should be handy especialy if nightmare made it....why is everyone calling me kid?
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Post by Netzuko Kymera on Dec 31, 2004 14:23:49 GMT -5
>_> <_< someone post something already!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Xzero on Dec 31, 2004 14:29:25 GMT -5
um can you hear me now "GOOD" ( keep going)
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Post by Netzuko Kymera on Dec 31, 2004 18:42:44 GMT -5
next comic fight with general! fight with general! fight with general!!!
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Post by MasterOmegaX on Dec 31, 2004 19:32:50 GMT -5
You should really capitalize the sentences, not doing so, makes the comic look un professional. Also, there are some commas that you need to add. Grammer is important for comics.
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Post by Vilex on Dec 31, 2004 19:46:08 GMT -5
yeah, MOX is right.. you dont your comic bad like how mine was in the beggining with my bad grammer and dialog XD. but heh, i'd try and keep the cussing down to a miniimum, its ok to do stuff like "Dammit" or whatever, but i mean dont make them say "fudge" all the time and such, its just... not right in comics.
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Post by Xero Bloodline on Dec 31, 2004 19:51:58 GMT -5
Yeah, they're right about the speech bubbles. Like I told someone else, don't type like you're in a chat when you're making speech bubbles. Also, I don't say fudge very much. Damnit, aww hell, son of a....those I say alot. But be as tasteful as you can with the swearing. Otherwise, I like where this comic is going.
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Post by Nightmare on Dec 31, 2004 21:05:58 GMT -5
"I am Nemisis and I've come to take some stuff." XD Yeah, swearing isn't the best for comics, I don't even think I've said anything worse than ass in my comics, hell, I dont remember even saying ass in my comics. I just use "damn", "damnit", "crap", and "hell". They're not that bad and they say alot. As for saying F***, I won't say that word, I won't type that word, and I try to avoid reading that word, so cut down on the language. Otherwise, you're doing great.
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Post by Knuckles on Jan 1, 2005 7:38:47 GMT -5
lol yh the swearing i was kinda suprised at, but meh life goes on. grammar, yea work on it in comics, and the whole "i'm here to take some stuff" thing, well... yea thats a bit un dramatic, but the comics are still good, so um.... make more... lots more
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Post by Netzuko Kymera on Jan 1, 2005 12:38:52 GMT -5
ok so more grammar huh is this any better? btw sorry about the swearing and crap i was just frusturated so i took out my anger on my comics ;D
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Post by Xzero on Jan 1, 2005 14:52:39 GMT -5
for the swearing if your ganna doi it at least dont do it to other people, cuase that makes them look like B****rds, and we dont want that and besides it not in there personality
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Post by Netzuko Kymera on Jan 1, 2005 20:03:49 GMT -5
um so far no one has sworn against another person...cept that earth shadow that told net-x to fudge off but, i didn't get mad cuz i killed him anyway new comic i see no one commented on my charging sprites or fire charging sprites heh...well xero to the rescue this should be good
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