|
Post by Netzuko Kymera on Feb 21, 2005 14:30:47 GMT -5
*looks at vilex* see I told you alchemy was a good idea. updation!
|
|
|
Post by Knuckles on Feb 22, 2005 11:28:28 GMT -5
longerererer comics plz!!! but me liek this one... now when do we see the alchemy?
|
|
|
Post by Netzuko Kymera on Mar 5, 2005 10:23:27 GMT -5
Oh God! Why is BusterAce the only one replieing?(I know that's spelled wrong XD) Stop being lazy asses and reply so I can get better...can't belive I'm doing this but, Paragon yo! come over here and C+C. img224.exs.cx/img224/7916/netxstories257jd.pngWell, If the train is run by hunters wouldn't you expect X to be here?
|
|
paragon
New Member
Member is offline
Posts: 0
|
Post by paragon on Mar 5, 2005 12:30:04 GMT -5
Alright, so first you yell at me for my C+C, and then you purposely ask for it. MAKE UP YOUR MIND PEOPLE.. But alright..
For one, it's spelled Maverick. Lots of people seem to misspell this, you're not alone. I've learned to deal with it, since Plague does it all the time.
In the fourth panel, both X and Net-X's dialogue could be improved. "Yea! killing all men is a mission, an evil one. You're going down!" - "Yea! Killing all my men is a mission, an evil one. You're going down!" (That could have improved it to me.) "I wanted to avoid big fights, but looks like you've left me no option." - "I wanted to avoid a big fight, but it looks like you've left me no option." (Another small thing to make it have more sense.)
Fifth panel, the top of the slash trail seems off from the rest of the trail. I don't understand why that is.
Good job. =D Can't wait for the next one.
And this is my personal opinion now, but you should make your comics at x2 size sometimes, it not only helps with the facial expressions, but it makes it more interesting to be able to see things up close.
-Paragon
|
|
|
Post by Netzuko Kymera on Mar 5, 2005 15:35:18 GMT -5
Alright I'll try the 200x200 thing, I was considering it anyways. The top of the slash trail isn't off pixel that's not even the slash trail that's the trail of X's dash remember I like to invert the colors when dashing, so the red scarf of X becomes kind of the same color of Net-x's saber.
I wanna apolagize for this fight I've been having with you, Kelso explained that you acted that way sometimes and you did it so people would improve so...sorry. I'll post a new comic soon.
|
|
|
Post by Netzuko Kymera on Mar 5, 2005 16:57:15 GMT -5
wow a double post, I would have thought that after Paragon posted others would also, oh well new comic and it's 200x200 w00t ok ToE episode: 026 img26.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img26&image=netxstories267kp.pngI'm proud of this episode actually, the 200x200 thing helps alot and it makes the ms paint version of the fade out thing look better huh? well C+C it.
|
|
|
Post by ZeroX on Mar 5, 2005 17:27:06 GMT -5
o your were talking about this on aim. yeah I already read it, MORE
|
|
|
Post by Knuckles on Mar 6, 2005 6:28:35 GMT -5
its nice, but it would be nicer to have longer comics, also the close up rele improves it.. good work keep it up
|
|
|
Post by Netzuko Kymera on Mar 6, 2005 15:21:05 GMT -5
|
|
|
Post by Nightmare on Mar 7, 2005 19:16:04 GMT -5
Yay! I kick ass! I wanna see more!
|
|
|
Post by Netzuko Kymera on Mar 13, 2005 9:25:48 GMT -5
|
|
|
Post by Nightmare on Mar 13, 2005 12:45:43 GMT -5
Again, cut down on the swearing..
|
|
|
Post by Netzuko Kymera on Mar 13, 2005 13:09:25 GMT -5
sorry
|
|
|
Post by Knuckles on Mar 13, 2005 14:09:30 GMT -5
lol i think the swearing makes it sound more real... anyways they state the obvious, an say stuff so bluntly, theres liek no secrets "we are indeed decieving you", when Net explains everythin... lol anyways, ur comic more please
|
|
paragon
New Member
Member is offline
Posts: 0
|
Post by paragon on Mar 13, 2005 21:37:16 GMT -5
Actually, swearing has nothing to do with making it real, especially the F-bomb, which can be replaced with just about any other more suitable word.
X's statement in panel four.. Yea. "You expect me to belive me to belive that? We are not being decived." Aside from the bad grammar, 'believe' is spelled wrong both times and so is 'decieved.'
Other than that, good work..
-Paragon
|
|