The Dark Hunter Stories

[DarkZ]

Okay, I decided to make this comic after talking with Xero and thanks to his encouragement. Now, I warn you who say there are color edits, I say this, "True as hell, but they have custom poses." Also, to clear something, the man in the comic, and the zero looking edit are ONE and the SAME. Got it? Okay, I explain it better later. Now to the story!

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Now, there will be more pages coming, but wait patiently, and I want critics, ok? Thanks!

[Netzuko Kymera]

Hmmm...Looks like a good start. I like where it's going so far, keep it up.

[DarkZ]

A little 'easy' guard in the way. This is more likely a 'small' fight scene, nothing large yet. Anyway, I'm tired and this is what happens when I do comics when I'm tired, forgive me for the low quality.

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[Netzuko Kymera]

C.o.c.k.y much?

[Seven]

Another random godmodding comic. Oh noes.

[MasterOmegaX]

I don't like how the frames are all, perfect and stuff. It'll look better if the frames were like different shapes and in different positions, looks more professional.

[Xero Bloodline]

seven said:

Another random godmodding comic. Oh noes.

Everybody's gotta start somewhere. Lets see where this one goes.

[Seven]

Is it going to be your eternal explanation for eveything? "Start somewhere"? I can tell you, one can surely begin a comic with a good plot, you just need to want. Try looking for those comics that made success and the ones that are barely read by people. You'll get an idea of what kinf of content is good or bad to your comic. It's so simple, why does everybody has to make the same mistake? And the same excuse?
I've made just 22 issues for my only comic and I didn't get any kind of rants like these.

[Xero Bloodline]

I was simply offering a little encouragement to a new spriter, didn't realize that was such a bad thing. But he can't learn without trying. I'll admit, he should learn from the mistakes of those before him, but shouldn't we all?

Btw, send me a link to your comic sometime, I'd like to check it out.

[Seven]

As you wish.

[DarkZ]

Well fine, cause you rant about this so much I redo the second page COMPLETELY. No promises about any fights though, so let's put the story on a LOOOOONG explanations type.

So, I skipped the battle completely and instead gave you some reading to do. No battling, just explanations. Happy now?

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[DarkZ]

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[Netzuko Kymera]

Hmmm....Nice, This comic has potential, you have potential! Apparently I didn't see it there before, but you have the what it takes to be a great comic master! Just make sure the story is kept as priority #1 rather than the fighting, and then start making your comics little by little.
Right now the next level for you would be to get photoshop and do some basic comic effects on your strips, then you should go to forums.bobandgeorge.com and go to their sprite section and got to a topic called "Public Domain Sprites" anything in there you can take without permission. Once you have that you should do some heavy edited sprites rather than minorly edited recolors and put those in your comic, then you should get cameos and finally learn heavy photoshop effects. These will be the steps to making one of the greatest comics ever, kid. Good luck, I'll be here if you need me

[DarkZ]

My my... Thank you for the reply, alot of thanks. *Bows thousand times.* The sad thing is, I can't get a photoshop, due to the little fate that I have windows 98 SE. No photoshop I find is 'usable' for it. However, if I get a photoshop, I'll make the sprite comic effect more and better. And yes, I have a plot ready and that character has a 'looong' and much work, true. *Nod nod.*

[Knuckles]

jus a pointer, i dont think reploids bleed (never seen em do it in the games) otherwise its pretty good. keep it up