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Post by Nightmare on Sept 17, 2008 16:36:01 GMT -5
That explains the bullet wounds in my face when I woke up this morning.
Nice comic. I really liked the expressions on the faces and whatnot. Plus, it was funny. XD
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Post by Professor Fann on Sept 18, 2008 0:38:38 GMT -5
Can improve on the dialogue box structuring, because I mostly didn't understand what was going on, except for the part on "out killing".
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Post by Nightmare on Sept 18, 2008 0:45:15 GMT -5
I thought it was fine. Especially for a little doodle. o.o;
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Post by Professor Fann on Sept 18, 2008 12:13:07 GMT -5
The flow of dialogues mostly got ot me. That's why I suggested proper text bubbles AND NOW, better flow of text bubbles. Even for a doodle, it still has to present itself good.
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Post by HZ on Oct 1, 2008 18:05:58 GMT -5
Back. Another Hyperion PicI don't know where this one came up though, I was bored (Read: Almost about to murder everyone in the room for entertainment bored) in study hall today, so I tried my hand at drawing. At first I wanted to try getting Luna with shorter hair, but that fell flat on it's face (I'll try to get to that later) so I tried Hyperion and again, that failed. So I just drew an eye in the corner of the page, and gave it a face and some facial features, hair, etc. and Hyperion was drawn again.... How I pulled that off is a mystery but it looked badass so I uploaded it and here it is. The old sketch and the new drawing is on the same page. Anyway, C+C and thanks for looking.
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Post by Rhonoc on Oct 11, 2008 4:31:54 GMT -5
Very nicely drawn. I have started recently drawing too, but I can't seem to get the face good. But this was superb. Especially the eyes look bad ass.
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Post by Albireo on Oct 11, 2008 4:49:20 GMT -5
Your style's pretty light hearted, it's great for comedy D:
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Post by Professor Fann on Oct 11, 2008 9:15:57 GMT -5
Awesome. I like that expression. Very detailedly drawn. Sleek and spunk.
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Post by HZ on Oct 22, 2008 18:08:53 GMT -5
Yo, back with another drawing: Luna's RedesignNothing too much to say about this one. I just fixed up some stuff I didn't quite like in the first pic I made with her, the long hair, (Which doesn't kinda fit for her in my mind, maybe I'll change it again, who knows. =\) and some of the proportions have been fixed (Her last pic made her have much wider hips than necessary >.o;) And this proves once again that I fail at drawing halfway decent poses...yet another thing to practice on ¬_¬; So, that's it, C+C and thanks again.
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Post by Nightmare on Oct 22, 2008 18:27:14 GMT -5
It's a very nice picture (pose included) but she looks kinda old. I dunno how old you intended her to be, but something about the old lady clothes, the hair, and the glasses make her look real old. I think I liked the last design better, but I'm not gonna tell you how to make your character look.
But if I were to, I'd suggest something in between these two designs. XP
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Post by HZ on Oct 22, 2008 18:59:35 GMT -5
Never really intended her to look old, eh, maybe I'll change something later. =|
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Post by aritheo on Oct 22, 2008 19:40:30 GMT -5
Ah...I quite like that. XD For me...she doesn't look so much old... but more mature, like she's in her 20's or early 30's. I like her hair, and the glasses came out very nice. <3
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Post by Professor Fann on Oct 22, 2008 22:13:34 GMT -5
I agree with Ari that she looks mature. Has the impression of a calm but brilliant personality. That charming smile, that hairstyle .. fits in nicely everywhere.
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Post by Albireo on Oct 26, 2008 5:52:05 GMT -5
I'll agree, it's mature, not old D:
I wanna see you draw an evil-looking person, all I've seen thus far is good-guys somewhat D:
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Post by Rhonoc on Oct 28, 2008 13:09:27 GMT -5
I agree with all of you, that she looks mature, but not old. I especially like the glasses. they came out great.
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