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Post by Professor Fann on May 24, 2008 1:06:27 GMT -5
Eh ... seems like just a stats report over a conversation. It's just fine and nice, nothing extraordinary. Just plain nice. I await a more exciting development.
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Post by Nicktendonick on Jun 4, 2008 23:50:13 GMT -5
It also doubles to make a innuendo of a cameo and also it serves me very well to introduce Nora into the actual story. Honestly, that was what I thought was going to be the hard part of the chapter.... untill I got to fefnir's part. Unlike the other two chapters, this isn't a simple rewrite, it's a whole new chapter 100% different from the old chapter. And honestly, writing this scene with fefnir is killing me when I get the recent seldom chances to actually write it. I only have two lines for the entire part of the chapter; this one's alot tougher. …I’m stuck…I need something to fill up space…some way to fill the time before I can get back on my rear end and write the rest of the chapter…I need... I need…a filler! Sprite comic filler, Go! Harpuia: you’re such a hack…. Me: Shut it Harpy boy, I’m doing what I can to keep this comic alive. hopefully...Harpuia's then Ciel's parts won't be as painful as what happened above...I hope
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Post by Professor Fann on Jun 5, 2008 6:50:41 GMT -5
An interesting filler. A factual filler, that is.
Well, too bad the older generation cannot last as long as everyone wanted it to be.
I await the next chapter.
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Post by Nicktendonick on Jun 29, 2008 1:02:09 GMT -5
Partial update. It's not the set in stone version, but close to it. Half of Chapter three is finished. I gotta say, writing Fefnir's section was one of the most exausting things I've done. I only had planned out a few lines, and jumped head first into it. And nearly a month later, you see how slow it took. I so got to never do that again....*rubs head*
Anyway, I just modified the post it was originalally in, So go check it out there. (last post of page 1)
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Post by Professor Fann on Jun 29, 2008 2:05:18 GMT -5
Well ... that was quite the read. Blackmailing and all that ... corruption is everywhere. Tech Kraken would be dead if he went, but h will die as we all know anyway.
This entire typing is indeed taking very long. Hopefully you'd post up hte rest so that my enthusiasm does not wear off.
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Post by Nicktendonick on Jun 29, 2008 2:28:15 GMT -5
Wow, I didn't think I'd get a response so soon. Cool. This entire typing is indeed taking very long. Hopefully you'd post up hte rest so that my enthusiasm does not wear off. To clarify, that ending talking about the assualt and to show Kraken's desire to fight Zero was the only two things I actually planned. all of which originally lasted a few paragraphs. The rest all came out of nowhere but ended up incorperated well to help show Kraken's desperation. Rest assured, once I get this monster of a chapter out of the way, catching up to where I was before will be alot easier. This whole chapter is not a remaking of the old chapter 3, it's a entirely new chapter. Tech Kraken would be dead if he went, but h will die as we all know anyway. While I haven't actually said it here, this isn't the first time Kraken's gone overboard trying to get his shot to fight Zero. (Hell, what he's doing in his stage in Z4 only proves how far he'll go). As to steal Mandy Patinkin's line from"The Princess Bride" "My Name is Tech Kraken. You Killed my Master. Prepair to die" Well ... that was quite the read. Blackmailing and all that ... corruption is everywhere. And you are right. Many political instuations will have their corruption, with people doing other people favors for other favors and so on, those who try to bend the rules to get what they want or gain profit. You need actual good people to be moral enough to reject these things, and leaders/regulations to remove such corrupted people out of power (or in Harpuia's case, blackmail them into retiring or forcing them to become his puppets). And besides, this is nothing compared to the corruption that raveged Copy-X's adminstration.
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Post by Professor Fann on Jun 29, 2008 22:35:16 GMT -5
Rest assured, once I get this monster of a chapter out of the way, catching up to where I was before will be alot easier. This whole chapter is not a remaking of the old chapter 3, it's a entirely new chapter. Very well then, I await the next update.
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