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Post by Albireo on Jan 26, 2009 5:30:35 GMT -5
*messes around for a bit*  |
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Post by Renegade on Jan 26, 2009 15:59:20 GMT -5
Looks good, would've been a bit better if you could read the text more clearly but I know scanners can be a jerk so no real complaints from there.
Not sure why you added nips for the little girl and not the rest or just get rid of the little girls, wasn't sure if your going with the, "little girls have innocence" thing where people usually don't care unless they have breasts, other then that the only thing(s) that could be changed to make it better, such as giving some more curves to the ladies in certain places, for some of them it looks like you put a dowel rod into their ribcage so they can't bend,
Other then those little sentiments its an overall good drawing, shows your female cast of characters.. or at least quite a few of them, and shows that your practicing more on figures which is a good thing because getting the overall figure down perfect isn't a simple task I know I can't do it either. Keep up the good work.
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Post by Albireo on Feb 4, 2009 4:39:29 GMT -5
I has a new one  |
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Post by Albireo on Feb 6, 2009 7:14:25 GMT -5
Twice in a row  |
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Post by swimstud600 on Feb 6, 2009 13:36:03 GMT -5
These are actually very good. No complaints here.
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Post by Professor Fann on Feb 7, 2009 0:47:41 GMT -5
You've been good and improving lately.
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Post by Albireo on Feb 7, 2009 1:50:35 GMT -5
Hehe, decided to color this =D And thanks  |
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Post by Professor Fann on Feb 9, 2009 12:58:14 GMT -5
The hair should be darker brown, me thinks, as they tend to be even. Unless he dyed his hair ... but other than that, the deliciousness is mine.
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Post by Albireo on Feb 12, 2009 5:19:11 GMT -5
Well, used different coloring pencils for this one, but I needed to try them out... So I've decided to stick with the ones I was using before, as this set is missing a few colors  |
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Post by Albireo on Feb 13, 2009 23:58:37 GMT -5
Where's the combo breaker?  |
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Post by Professor Fann on Feb 14, 2009 0:07:20 GMT -5
Not bad for a close-up and not bad. You have the legs outline right, which is something I've been trying to learn for some time.
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Post by Albireo on Feb 15, 2009 3:59:25 GMT -5
Oh, well thanks Anyways, some testing here and there, as well as first finished attempt at a loli... Don't judge me, I need variety.  |
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Post by Professor Fann on Feb 15, 2009 21:50:30 GMT -5
Eh ...is that a child you just drew? Left hand is shorter than normal, and yo might want to give the right hand a little bendie to note the elbow. Face needs to be a bit thinner.
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Post by Albireo on Feb 17, 2009 6:16:54 GMT -5
Mah Scanner is too small And personally I think kids should have more round faces D:  |
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Post by Professor Fann on Feb 17, 2009 20:44:15 GMT -5
Eh, a decent comic done by the Albireo Salty Mayo. Not bad, but you'll have to clean up the page and maybe do those colouring of yours which will make it nice.
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