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Post by Albireo on May 1, 2009 1:53:38 GMT -5
Now that you mention it, I could...
Gonna take awhile to find a good, striking and seductive pose
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Post by Albireo on May 2, 2009 19:50:36 GMT -5
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Post by Nightmare on May 2, 2009 23:15:21 GMT -5
Hands look infemine You need practice with girly and delicate looking hands Irony. Face could also use some work. Other than that, nice. Keep practicing. |
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Post by Albireo on May 2, 2009 23:38:16 GMT -5
Irony yes, but on purpose. She's meant to be a tomboy, so adding male elements sort of reinforces that.
And I do agree, face does need some work...
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Post by Ruinaru on May 2, 2009 23:54:02 GMT -5
I'm not a huge fan of the guitar design, but it's a cool pose and a cool character. Like others have said, hands and face could use work, but I like it.
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Post by Nightmare on May 3, 2009 5:10:02 GMT -5
I dunno. Tomboy is a style, not a shape-shift to have manly looking parts thing. XD
I do like the design though. Is it original? Or is it a drawing of a friend's character?
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Post by Albireo on May 3, 2009 8:26:56 GMT -5
Friend's character, that's actually the coat from DGM, well, the DGM coats were the base design, since they sort of changed them between characters.
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Post by Professor Fann on May 3, 2009 23:23:46 GMT -5
That's more of a metallic pose with all the rocking feeling.
Change of theme. Drastic, but fun.
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Post by swimstud600 on May 5, 2009 0:42:28 GMT -5
The eyes. That's what's wrong specificly with teh face.
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Post by Albireo on May 5, 2009 3:35:56 GMT -5
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Post by Professor Fann on May 9, 2009 11:46:19 GMT -5
I do not think the chest and stomach muscle is that emphasized. You might want to watch some reality shows to refer to that correction.
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Post by Ruinaru on May 9, 2009 21:02:19 GMT -5
The top of the pecs shouldn't be that well-defined, and it looks like his abs are in a hole in abdomen. The lines around the abs look more like stretch marks than muscles. Same goes for the arms. The arm on his left also looks kinda weird. The forshortening needs some work.
However, it's a good pose and a good design. Interesting concept, using water as a solid surface.
This may sound kinda weird, but look at some shirtless men. Should help you figure out the way muscles look.
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Post by Albireo on May 9, 2009 22:57:16 GMT -5
Well, I haven't done muscles for long, so as far as learning I've still got copious amounts of time of obervation to get done
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Post by Albireo on May 14, 2009 5:53:40 GMT -5
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Post by Albireo on May 21, 2009 1:57:07 GMT -5
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