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Post by Nightmare on Oct 11, 2008 4:55:26 GMT -5
oshi-
Nicely done. She's pretty. XD
I really like her design. Keep it up. XP
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Post by Albireo on Oct 11, 2008 6:39:36 GMT -5
I decided to go and ink her through as well D: As far as I know, I still have a lot to learn when it comes to cross-hatching D:
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Post by Rhonoc on Oct 11, 2008 8:20:11 GMT -5
I think it is very nicely done. And is the wind blowing? Because the sleeves are going to the right (our), but hair falls straight down. If the wind isn't blowing, then the sleeves should go straight down as well. At least that's what I think. Again, I think it's very nicely done.
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Post by Professor Fann on Oct 11, 2008 9:18:56 GMT -5
Awesomely done. It's a total break from your previous artstyle it seems, which could be very progressive and positive. Continue on.
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Post by Nightmare on Oct 11, 2008 16:39:25 GMT -5
I wouldn't call it a break from his art style... It still has that look that it's obviously his work.
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Post by Albireo on Oct 11, 2008 21:56:42 GMT -5
If it's any sort of break, it's a break on drawing men, I need to pay more attention to drawing women.
Once I get the motivation, I'll draw my vampire guy for Halloween, and my wind guy once I get the idea on how to draw wind. *forgot to research*
Also there's no wind, she's just leaned back
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Post by Professor Fann on Oct 12, 2008 2:50:39 GMT -5
Technically, comparing your previous art on men and women, you're a lot better with the ladies than men. If that's not the case ... that's why I said it's like a total breakaway from your previous art.
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Post by Albireo on Oct 12, 2008 5:14:56 GMT -5
Really?... I didn't know that D:
All I did was experiment with new eyes and find out what my female faces were lacking D:
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Post by Professor Fann on Oct 12, 2008 6:56:49 GMT -5
In that case, very good. It seems that a change in eyes and facial curves does make a good big difference. Keep up the good work and we'd see how else you'd perform in the future.
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Post by Albireo on Oct 13, 2008 3:40:03 GMT -5
Well I've decided to begin testing new eyes out, expanding from my typical, small, male eyes.
Also I'm waiting on an iPhone so I can start taking pictures to make as bases for backgrounds. While I do that I'll just test out some eyes and whatnot
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Post by Albireo on Oct 16, 2008 5:08:54 GMT -5
I tried a new pose D: With Tri again >_>
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Post by Professor Fann on Oct 16, 2008 10:03:07 GMT -5
Nice. You're quickly developing your eye for details and accuracy. I think the facial expressions still need work however.
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Post by Nightmare on Oct 17, 2008 0:01:27 GMT -5
There's nothing wrong with the faces on any of them really. Just they usually have kind of a emotionless look. Dunno if that's intentional, but some more fitting faces would help enhance the pictures.
Regardless, looks good. Keep it up.
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Post by Albireo on Oct 17, 2008 0:42:13 GMT -5
For this guy it's intentional. Otherwise I'm still trying to make those angry, sort of heavily creased looks... For that I'll take a look at Bleach, since I've been told it has a few similarities to Bleach >_>
Also, I found that his eyes were looking elsewhere, so I edited after I scanned it, since I found out afterwards. I'll have the inked version sometime today >_<
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Post by Albireo on Oct 17, 2008 6:12:29 GMT -5
Well, I have the inked version now
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