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Post by Ztrl on Nov 4, 2008 12:39:05 GMT -5
The left shoulder is a little out of place. Other than that it's pretty good.
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Post by Albireo on Nov 5, 2008 4:39:26 GMT -5
Nother new one... Still yet to name it D:
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Post by Rhonoc on Nov 5, 2008 10:39:36 GMT -5
Why does the left ones left arm look weird? Also the thing I'd point out would be the fact that the right ones head is too straight. But a very nice battle drawing. The effects look neat as well.
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Post by Ztrl on Nov 5, 2008 10:48:45 GMT -5
Same problem I pointed out in the last one. The left shoulder needs to drop back further.
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Post by Professor Fann on Nov 5, 2008 10:55:55 GMT -5
I agree with the rest.
And ... is it just me or did you base that person on Fate Averruncus? Except the other guy on the right.
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Post by Albireo on Nov 6, 2008 0:18:45 GMT -5
Yes, I did, but I made him long ago D:
And you mean the left guy's arm? The one with the aura or the normal one?
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Post by Albireo on Nov 7, 2008 5:34:19 GMT -5
Well, here's to a bit of random thoughts... I dunno, it's been awhile since I last drew a samurai girl anyways
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Post by Nightmare on Nov 7, 2008 6:50:12 GMT -5
Really like the design. =O
Shaded real nicely, good pose...
Awesome. XD
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Post by Professor Fann on Nov 7, 2008 22:32:41 GMT -5
Hmm, it's still good. No troubles here.
Makes you wonder if everyone likes keeping their hair that long.
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Post by Albireo on Nov 8, 2008 2:33:06 GMT -5
Joking: Who cares, it's anime Serious: Asians have been known not to cut their hair, especially if they're a warrior, as it symbolizes wisdom and experience for them And already, I have another one...
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Post by Professor Fann on Nov 8, 2008 6:52:28 GMT -5
Again, the face. Needs more femininity - looks very much like a male. The grass might have ben whirled on differently, as that is the natural pattern of wind.
Other than that, it's fine.
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Post by Albireo on Nov 8, 2008 6:56:54 GMT -5
Still working on that faces... Though for some reason half way through my style, seeing as I looked back on my progress vaguely, I began to wander away from drawing the right faces...
Oh well, still working on them anyways, one cannot expect to get it right in a day
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Post by Arashi on Nov 8, 2008 22:08:50 GMT -5
For females, bring the chin in a bit and make the eyes a little bigger than male eyes. Also, thinner eyebrows, and maybe eyelashes. But I suck at drawing people anyways, so I should shut up..xD Anyways, I LOVE your style. It's awesome xD
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Post by Professor Fann on Nov 9, 2008 3:31:49 GMT -5
Eh ... how many days has it been since I first asked you to change the facial expressions?
Oh well, never mind. Do your best next time.
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Post by Albireo on Nov 11, 2008 3:44:55 GMT -5
I don't know... When was that? D: I'm gonna try expressions as a bit of doodling work, so meh First ever colored work D:
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