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Post by Nightmare on Nov 1, 2008 21:29:50 GMT -5
I really, really like the Halloween one. XD
Something about the proportions on the newest one seem kinda off though. Not sure what it is. Looks nice still though. =O
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Post by Albireo on Nov 2, 2008 2:25:47 GMT -5
Eh... Here's an idea I've had in mind for quite awhile Anyways, enjoy
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Post by Professor Fann on Nov 2, 2008 2:58:01 GMT -5
Oh, a comic-like idea, nice.
I think you have his right hand wrong, the one flaming in black. It's just not possible to twist his hand like that. It should be a mirror opposite of the left hand, and if it did, it would have shown the right side of his body as well.
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Post by Albireo on Nov 2, 2008 3:11:12 GMT -5
I twisted it around, cos I'm not gonna make a 2nd page just for that D:
Cos this was actually to get the idea of making pages down...
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Post by Professor Fann on Nov 2, 2008 3:16:05 GMT -5
You can still fit it in this page. Just a bit of the shirt and body and that will do. As those white outlines used to contrast to a black colour everywhere.
Anatomically, that twist is very impossible.
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Post by Sorrum on Nov 2, 2008 3:28:19 GMT -5
His arms look too small to be on him, try making them a little thicker.
Also, if he's powering up, you might want to try a different view. Try something like an angle from above, with some shading over his eyes or face. Otakus eat that sh*t up.
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Post by Nightmare on Nov 2, 2008 4:16:23 GMT -5
Actually Fan, that twist is extremely possible. I'm doing it right now. In fact, it's impossible for it not to be possible. Are you sure you're just not looking at it wrong?
Nice comic thing dude. =O
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Post by Albireo on Nov 2, 2008 5:12:14 GMT -5
Wow, that twist was possible D:
Oh well, I kinda saw it coming when I posted it anyways?
So aside from that, he's in his final form. Supposedly from the + and - signs, you can come to the conclusion that he controls polarity
Which is correct... He can also make just about everything, even people magnetic, though he charges them all with the polarity first. If one object had both polarities, if he puts enough energy into it, he can make the object explode. Even people of course
Though the polarity wears off over time >_>
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Post by FDSuprema on Nov 2, 2008 8:54:50 GMT -5
Ouch.... sounds painful >.o;
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Post by Rhonoc on Nov 2, 2008 10:05:35 GMT -5
It looks really nice. Only thing that pops in my head (which can be only me though) is that the neck seems kinda long. I'm not sure of it, but it kinda does. I also like the effects that you made for the power-up.
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Post by Ruinaru on Nov 2, 2008 14:20:23 GMT -5
No, that twist is not possible, guys. If we're talking about the bottom left frame, that arm would have to be coming from the other side in order for the back of the hand to be showing and the thumb to be on top. As it is, the fingers should be showing, or the thumb should be on the bottom.
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Post by Professor Fann on Nov 2, 2008 22:38:31 GMT -5
It's still not possible to twist the right hand into such a way that it looks exactly like the left hand. That hand surrounded by the black flame is the right hand, I see it fine. The way it is possible for a right hand to have a left hand look ... is to have two left hands.
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Post by Ruinaru on Nov 2, 2008 23:00:04 GMT -5
Yeah. Fann's actually right this time. The way you've drawn it, the two closeups of his hands are of the same hand with different gloves.
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Post by Albireo on Nov 3, 2008 3:09:16 GMT -5
Eh, true, but it's my first, and not something I should be especially proud of. Rather it's a base >_>
Also, about the neck problem, I'm working on making it look better, so far, making the torso thinner works...
But I'll need two pages next time... I'll look back to remaking this into two pages. That is if I remember it >_<
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Post by Professor Fann on Nov 4, 2008 1:46:09 GMT -5
Write down on a sticky note then.
Glad to hear you're dealing with them.
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