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Post by harpuiaslash on Feb 15, 2004 19:24:11 GMT -5
***NOTE*** all of these are separate and untitled
You stare into my eyes, a deep crimson blue sea. The tides of my heart are slowly changing, as they crash on the borders of my soul. I see you as a different person, not caring what happens to me. So I will leave you here, in the forbidden memories of my heart, where i will never see or hear you again. As I walk to my new life, remember one thing: Love's A B*tch...Get used to it
Lost in the wreckage of a million bad dreams, cold in the shadow of who I should be. I found myself lost and scared in the darkness of my mind, trying to find who I really am. Searching for clues to where I am from, my mind racing with different thoughts. I continue my search alone, against the cold, harsh wind called reality.
The flow of time can be cruel, ever changing, its path always flowing. The world can not stop because you want it to, never slowing down for one person. The hands of time can't be altered, but your fate and destiny can.
Life...always shifting, always growing, never ceasing to rest. It always seems to amaze you, throwing things at you one after the other. Unexpected twists and turns along the way, expected obstacles block the way of success. The light of the ones you love will shine, and show you the way to take.
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Post by Xero Bloodline on Feb 16, 2004 18:54:25 GMT -5
Pretty good. I will commend you for writing something besides "love sucks, life sucks, the whole world sucks." That kinda stuff is good, but gets old without variety. What you posted here looks good though, keep up the good work.
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Post by Ztrl on Feb 17, 2004 19:06:39 GMT -5
It's pretty good I could have done better on one of them (only if it was a required school assignment though) Other wise....excellent! go here: zerothelegend.proboards28.com It's my site, And I let people post what ever they wan't No restrictions what so ever....AND BEST OF ALL NO CENCORED WORDS!
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