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Post by Professor Fann on Mar 17, 2007 14:06:37 GMT -5
I have written these fictions a long time ago, but I've decided to post up the links so that others can read it. In particular this goes to mister Swim, who enjoys reading fanfics and commenting on them. there's extra posts in there by other mmbers who have read and commented as well as some small chat. I strongly advise you to remain in within the given linked webpages instead of moving elsewhere. The first instalment: An Axl Story First Series The second instalment: An Axl Story Continuation The third instalment: An Axl Story Existpeace All can be found at the Fan Fiction section at www.mmeras.com/forums. Enjoy the fictions.
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Post by swimstud600 on Apr 28, 2007 21:23:04 GMT -5
Alright I told you I'd read it eventually, I finally had time to read it. I thought the beginning sucked, mostly because you kept switching verb tense and other errors in the writing. It was a little boring in the beginning too but thats how a lot of stories are at first, then something happens to rope you in. It got a lot better as I got furthur into it, I can see you do know a thing or two about writing.
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Post by Professor Fann on Apr 29, 2007 15:53:14 GMT -5
Yay Swim finally able to replied! Well, initially I was so excited of the idea of writing a fanfiction, so I just blurbed out everything I could think of at the same time. The ideas never started to bloom until I finished typing the first series altogether. Currently on hiatus for the thrid sequel. Do you want to read teh second sequel?
Thanks for coming!
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Post by viruszero on May 2, 2007 1:17:08 GMT -5
It seems fairly interesting so far (Of what I've read- which is up to chapter 6...) Though I'll give it a more thorough response once I finish reading through it.
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Post by Peytral on May 2, 2007 19:25:42 GMT -5
I've read up to chapter 6 like VirusZero. And it's pretty darn good. But the sudden Lumine personality change thing weirded me out.
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Post by Professor Fann on May 2, 2007 22:41:08 GMT -5
Ah, the First Series is it? Keep on reading, you'll find something about Axl everyone in the fan world speculates some time, but what I say here is just theoretical and for the fanfic-ness.
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Post by Peytral on May 3, 2007 16:41:02 GMT -5
Finished the first part. And I loved every bit of it. Now to read the Axl story continuation
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Post by Professor Fann on May 4, 2007 5:24:21 GMT -5
You're welcome on that. Enjoy the reading.
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Post by Peytral on May 4, 2007 15:50:27 GMT -5
Now that I finished it, I'm going to die due to waiting for the next installment!
Do you have any idea of when you'll make it?
Oh and Lumine seems to be more important than Axl in "An Axl Story" So it seems more like
A Lumine Story
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Post by Professor Fann on May 8, 2007 14:02:02 GMT -5
Well, no. Eventually Axl will have to be given praise for more of his actions which were sequential to everything. Update of the third fanfic in the first post. Warning - may be too much words for you.
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Post by Peytral on May 10, 2007 23:13:28 GMT -5
I just read Existpeace and once again, no flaws. The battle between the hunters and White Axl was extremely action packed. In fact, this is so perfect that I really can't say much more.
I shall eagerly await for the next part.
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Post by swimstud600 on May 11, 2007 0:01:52 GMT -5
I dunno why this is getting so much attention and mine is undisturbed, I post once in here and the thing takes off.
Anyhow, this has been said before but you are incredibly detailed. The reader doesn't know if this seemingly insignificant detail is going to be a major part of the story later or if its just there for realism. That being said, sometimes theres too much realism to the point where it gets boring, a few more battle scenes couldn't hurt.
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Post by Professor Fann on May 11, 2007 10:02:37 GMT -5
Why thank you so much. You hsould read the end notes of the last chapters of each series. Those are the dates which state when I started typing and finsihed the whole thing. It's quite a feat to write many fanfictions in within a year and a half for me, since I have never done this before.
As you may know from Existpeace the next sequel named Greatfriction is being typed, but unfortunately, it has been halted by a Ban. From December 2006 to beginning July 2007. So don't expect any from this one.
AND THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR SUPPORT.
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