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Post by Andrew on Nov 26, 2005 14:12:21 GMT -5
You should probably get better with your English before you start writing fics. It's very difficult to read, but it's still read-able..
Not much content for the first chapter, so UPDATE.
-Haruchine
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Post by darkreaver on Nov 26, 2005 17:20:54 GMT -5
well he warned me not to read his fanfic... now I see why.. thats.. alot of typos... how about letting someone fix them before posting it?
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Post by painbreaker on Dec 10, 2005 7:59:20 GMT -5
YEah I THAT A REALLY OLD FANFIC and now you see why I don't wrote them
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