Post by program on Mar 9, 2007 21:15:52 GMT -5
Hello again everyone!
Rock Man X Live WireTM[/b] Is my Rock Man X comic I've been working on as a hobby. These text form previews I show here are for everyone to post their thoughts on how to improve, and or the feeling of it. And give out ideas of what should be added or taking out. After all, many heads are better then one.
This series and story is copyrighted by me. If seen anywhere else on anyone's work, (do contact me) because then it may have been stolen from here.
All characters belong to © CAPCOM., LTD. All Rights Reserved. Except those you have never heard before, and places and locations are created by me © ~Program-00X. Any characters with names that are of any persons in reality are of a coincident.
I've made many changes to the story of this comic and characters, this is the latest and so far final version. Enjoy my partly detailed previews.
Preview Chapter One - The Dream Burner:
Taking place somewhere long in the Rock Man X series; it is the story of Dr. Cristy Aylsworth; One of the lead scientist in the 'Amber Door Research Facility,' that floats atop the Atlantic ocean. She has a daughter, 6 years of age, Kassy Aylsworth.
Amber Door Research Facility - Wednesday, February 4, 10:24 AM.
The head research division of Research Facility Amber Door, discovers the ruins of Dr. Cossack's laboratory. Yes, that Russian man, who has a daughter named Kalinka, that works with Dr. Right/Light in the original Rock Man series.
In the ruins of Cossack's lab, they find the incomplete design plans to a female robot, in the likeness of his passed away daughter Kalinka. One of the scientist, 'Dr. Cristy' is fascinated with the designs, and after some examinations and a few pleas, The head of Amber Door finally grants Dr. Cristy permission to create a Reploid based on Cossack's unfinished plans.
Thus, DCN-013 Arco is completed, and activated.
Female angel type Reploid - Class C hunter - And one of the main guards of Amber Door.
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Next, Yaluk Moon Research & Science Laboratory - October, Friday 15, 3:36 PM...
A new Reploid type is being designed, a type that can transmit viruses to other machine life forms to disable, and or take control. He is named YLN-003 - Un-Eliab...
Shortly after near completion of his outer frame design, he broke out in a mad frenzy, smashed through his capsule, fervently killing all humans/scientist, and machine life he could lay his scanners upon... The head Scientist, and main guard of Yaluk Moon Laboratory, JLN-001 - Lumine; was activated, and quickly and teleported from the nearby research lab he was on, to Yaluk... But all to late... All life was dead. And all cameras where destroyed. Only the now ruins of Yaluk where the sure-fire proof of Un-Eliab's unprovoked rage. Lumine hanged his head in internal pain, and sorrow. Only seconds passed after, a shadow slowly formed behind Lumine. He turned to look at who it was before him...
"I know it's you... Un-Eliab..." - Lumine
Un-Eliab tilled his head to one side, and smiled, as he played with someone's (a human's) torn off hand.
"... Well, How are you doing today?" - Un-Eliab
Lumine stared at him for a few seconds, then looked around at the dead bodes of human and machine that lay before him. Turned his head to one side, in fast rising anger.
"... Why... Why all this?!" - Lumine
Un-Eliab carelessly cast aside the torn off human hand, and quickly smiled again even more happily, as he licked the blood from his hands like a low dog.
"Because I wanted too! What's wrong with that now?" - Un-Eliab
Seconds passed, Lumine's one showing eye of glowing amber, now shown blazing red light! His face of anger and sorrow became cold and deadly.... And began to mockingly and eerily laugh at Virus as he slowly began... Rising from the floor he stood upon... Then he looked up with a smile that sent the feel of final damnation throughout the soul...
"... The stars are pretty in this sky upon the moon... they will be the last thing you'll see... Heh heh heh!" - Lumine
Two seconds after Lumine spoke that, laughing he lashed out his opened hand blazing with red energy toward Un-Eliab to form curved walls of power that would close on him, paralyzing him. But then... A small girl in a white lace, soft dark brown colored long sleeved dress, came desperately running in, to stand in front of Un-Eliab. Crying as she spoke with such a voice of sheer fear, that would melt even the heart of any harden soul.
"*Crying hard* ... DON'T YOU HURT MY PAPA!!!" - Kassy Aylsworth
Lumine was in shock... And mass confusion! He quickly shook his head as he withdraw his oncoming powers of attack upon Un-Eliab, before they 'would' kill her... Kassy who stood in front of Un-Eliab, arms wide spread to protect. Face of tearful terror, and sadness.
Previews 1 End
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Here now is the second preview of my comic series...
First, about the Crush Mind Weapons Development Center -
The C.M.W.D, or "Crush Mind Weapons Development" is a series of buildings that at one time developed weapons for the Irregular/Maverick Hunters. Although, now for reasons I can't give out yet; is the main illegal developer for weapons used by the S.O.T.R, or "Soldiers Of True Right," whom are humans who think their doing goodness by looking down upon all Reploids and machine life. They work hard illegally behind the backs of governments, to make real the concept of: "A machine is just that, a machine; and is design and will obey and serve the needs of humans; nothing more. "As you could image, the S.O.T.R are a huge temper trigger to X, being one of his life goals to establish the equal rights for all humans and machines alike.
Preview Chapter Two - Rights of the Humans:
Building 3 - Crush Mind Weapons Development Center - (Time takes place hours soon after the out brake on Yaluk.)
A seemingly calm and peaceful night at the C.M.W.D, then without even a slight warning:
"Intruder Alert. Intruder Alert. Main gates 9, 8, and 7, have been breeched, all battle units retaliate now. This is not a drill. repeat, this is not a drill. Intruder Is now moving quickly towards the main core. All battle units head to main core now." - Main Security Computer.
C.M.W.D. Guard Reploids quickly ran to stand and block gate 6. About 5 seconds passed, A red glowing robotic eye appeared in the darkness of the hall, it's center gold iris could be seen moving as it scanned around, the guard Reploids felt clearly it was focusing on them, and every slight move they made.
"The situation has now progressed to a stage where those who lend their power to Sigma, will fall to me. There is no point in giving your lives of worth in vain." - X
A lead guard Reploid stop to download to the others a plan of clever trick of ambush to take X whom they know was before them down. but then another guard Reploid nearby just laughed and raised up his gun... And started to fire.
A furious yet majestic battle cry echoed throughout what was seemingly all halls of the great building, a immense wave of a plasma shot, headed at the guard Reploids, destroyed they were instantly. The sound of fierce blast of plasma, that one, by one, pounded throughout the facility; the radiation gave out by the shots burned and dissolved through the walls of the center, like acid through foam. And through the guard Reploids that stand in frozen terror. X steadily Ran from each hall to the next, leaving nothing but blue glowing flames of the fallen behind him.
"Warning. Intruder Alert. has breeched gates 6, 5, 4, and 3, Final lock down of core been activated. Intruder is identified as Unit DRN-00X Rock Man X - Reploid design prototype - Class B Commanding hunter of Unit 17. Complete Lock down in 8 minutes. All remaining battle Units retaliate." - Main Security Computer.
X fired at the final gates. They were seemingly indestructible, even his power could do nothing more than dent the gleaming walls... X's forehead eye camera scanned for anyways of breaking through, but it was no use. The gate was made of a new alloy of unknown origin.
"Damn... This core will lock down soon... Zero. I have reached the second final gate to the core. Yet none of my weapons penetrate; it's made of an alloy I've... GAHHHH!" - X
*X's signal cuts off*
What? ... X?! - Zero who waited outside the facility for the impassable fact of incoming Battle units of S.O.T.R, quickly began to run to the facility. Teleporting was not an option; since the signal it gave out would be picked up by S.O.T.R Mechs. Whom were already activated at the time of the beginning of the core's lock down; they set their aim at Zero.
Inside the hall way to the second final gate:
X keeled on the floor, his left arm was blown clean off, up to the upper shoulder. He turned to look at who had done this to him... A human, was standing before him...
Previews 2 End
I now decide to end my show of previews. I realize it was not in much details, but that's how I want it.
Rock Man X Live WireTM[/b] Is my Rock Man X comic I've been working on as a hobby. These text form previews I show here are for everyone to post their thoughts on how to improve, and or the feeling of it. And give out ideas of what should be added or taking out. After all, many heads are better then one.
This series and story is copyrighted by me. If seen anywhere else on anyone's work, (do contact me) because then it may have been stolen from here.
All characters belong to © CAPCOM., LTD. All Rights Reserved. Except those you have never heard before, and places and locations are created by me © ~Program-00X. Any characters with names that are of any persons in reality are of a coincident.
I've made many changes to the story of this comic and characters, this is the latest and so far final version. Enjoy my partly detailed previews.
Preview Chapter One - The Dream Burner:
Taking place somewhere long in the Rock Man X series; it is the story of Dr. Cristy Aylsworth; One of the lead scientist in the 'Amber Door Research Facility,' that floats atop the Atlantic ocean. She has a daughter, 6 years of age, Kassy Aylsworth.
Amber Door Research Facility - Wednesday, February 4, 10:24 AM.
The head research division of Research Facility Amber Door, discovers the ruins of Dr. Cossack's laboratory. Yes, that Russian man, who has a daughter named Kalinka, that works with Dr. Right/Light in the original Rock Man series.
In the ruins of Cossack's lab, they find the incomplete design plans to a female robot, in the likeness of his passed away daughter Kalinka. One of the scientist, 'Dr. Cristy' is fascinated with the designs, and after some examinations and a few pleas, The head of Amber Door finally grants Dr. Cristy permission to create a Reploid based on Cossack's unfinished plans.
Thus, DCN-013 Arco is completed, and activated.
Female angel type Reploid - Class C hunter - And one of the main guards of Amber Door.
-----
Next, Yaluk Moon Research & Science Laboratory - October, Friday 15, 3:36 PM...
A new Reploid type is being designed, a type that can transmit viruses to other machine life forms to disable, and or take control. He is named YLN-003 - Un-Eliab...
Shortly after near completion of his outer frame design, he broke out in a mad frenzy, smashed through his capsule, fervently killing all humans/scientist, and machine life he could lay his scanners upon... The head Scientist, and main guard of Yaluk Moon Laboratory, JLN-001 - Lumine; was activated, and quickly and teleported from the nearby research lab he was on, to Yaluk... But all to late... All life was dead. And all cameras where destroyed. Only the now ruins of Yaluk where the sure-fire proof of Un-Eliab's unprovoked rage. Lumine hanged his head in internal pain, and sorrow. Only seconds passed after, a shadow slowly formed behind Lumine. He turned to look at who it was before him...
"I know it's you... Un-Eliab..." - Lumine
Un-Eliab tilled his head to one side, and smiled, as he played with someone's (a human's) torn off hand.
"... Well, How are you doing today?" - Un-Eliab
Lumine stared at him for a few seconds, then looked around at the dead bodes of human and machine that lay before him. Turned his head to one side, in fast rising anger.
"... Why... Why all this?!" - Lumine
Un-Eliab carelessly cast aside the torn off human hand, and quickly smiled again even more happily, as he licked the blood from his hands like a low dog.
"Because I wanted too! What's wrong with that now?" - Un-Eliab
Seconds passed, Lumine's one showing eye of glowing amber, now shown blazing red light! His face of anger and sorrow became cold and deadly.... And began to mockingly and eerily laugh at Virus as he slowly began... Rising from the floor he stood upon... Then he looked up with a smile that sent the feel of final damnation throughout the soul...
"... The stars are pretty in this sky upon the moon... they will be the last thing you'll see... Heh heh heh!" - Lumine
Two seconds after Lumine spoke that, laughing he lashed out his opened hand blazing with red energy toward Un-Eliab to form curved walls of power that would close on him, paralyzing him. But then... A small girl in a white lace, soft dark brown colored long sleeved dress, came desperately running in, to stand in front of Un-Eliab. Crying as she spoke with such a voice of sheer fear, that would melt even the heart of any harden soul.
"*Crying hard* ... DON'T YOU HURT MY PAPA!!!" - Kassy Aylsworth
Lumine was in shock... And mass confusion! He quickly shook his head as he withdraw his oncoming powers of attack upon Un-Eliab, before they 'would' kill her... Kassy who stood in front of Un-Eliab, arms wide spread to protect. Face of tearful terror, and sadness.
Previews 1 End
---------------------------------------------------------------------------
Here now is the second preview of my comic series...
First, about the Crush Mind Weapons Development Center -
The C.M.W.D, or "Crush Mind Weapons Development" is a series of buildings that at one time developed weapons for the Irregular/Maverick Hunters. Although, now for reasons I can't give out yet; is the main illegal developer for weapons used by the S.O.T.R, or "Soldiers Of True Right," whom are humans who think their doing goodness by looking down upon all Reploids and machine life. They work hard illegally behind the backs of governments, to make real the concept of: "A machine is just that, a machine; and is design and will obey and serve the needs of humans; nothing more. "As you could image, the S.O.T.R are a huge temper trigger to X, being one of his life goals to establish the equal rights for all humans and machines alike.
Preview Chapter Two - Rights of the Humans:
Building 3 - Crush Mind Weapons Development Center - (Time takes place hours soon after the out brake on Yaluk.)
A seemingly calm and peaceful night at the C.M.W.D, then without even a slight warning:
"Intruder Alert. Intruder Alert. Main gates 9, 8, and 7, have been breeched, all battle units retaliate now. This is not a drill. repeat, this is not a drill. Intruder Is now moving quickly towards the main core. All battle units head to main core now." - Main Security Computer.
C.M.W.D. Guard Reploids quickly ran to stand and block gate 6. About 5 seconds passed, A red glowing robotic eye appeared in the darkness of the hall, it's center gold iris could be seen moving as it scanned around, the guard Reploids felt clearly it was focusing on them, and every slight move they made.
"The situation has now progressed to a stage where those who lend their power to Sigma, will fall to me. There is no point in giving your lives of worth in vain." - X
A lead guard Reploid stop to download to the others a plan of clever trick of ambush to take X whom they know was before them down. but then another guard Reploid nearby just laughed and raised up his gun... And started to fire.
A furious yet majestic battle cry echoed throughout what was seemingly all halls of the great building, a immense wave of a plasma shot, headed at the guard Reploids, destroyed they were instantly. The sound of fierce blast of plasma, that one, by one, pounded throughout the facility; the radiation gave out by the shots burned and dissolved through the walls of the center, like acid through foam. And through the guard Reploids that stand in frozen terror. X steadily Ran from each hall to the next, leaving nothing but blue glowing flames of the fallen behind him.
"Warning. Intruder Alert. has breeched gates 6, 5, 4, and 3, Final lock down of core been activated. Intruder is identified as Unit DRN-00X Rock Man X - Reploid design prototype - Class B Commanding hunter of Unit 17. Complete Lock down in 8 minutes. All remaining battle Units retaliate." - Main Security Computer.
X fired at the final gates. They were seemingly indestructible, even his power could do nothing more than dent the gleaming walls... X's forehead eye camera scanned for anyways of breaking through, but it was no use. The gate was made of a new alloy of unknown origin.
"Damn... This core will lock down soon... Zero. I have reached the second final gate to the core. Yet none of my weapons penetrate; it's made of an alloy I've... GAHHHH!" - X
*X's signal cuts off*
What? ... X?! - Zero who waited outside the facility for the impassable fact of incoming Battle units of S.O.T.R, quickly began to run to the facility. Teleporting was not an option; since the signal it gave out would be picked up by S.O.T.R Mechs. Whom were already activated at the time of the beginning of the core's lock down; they set their aim at Zero.
Inside the hall way to the second final gate:
X keeled on the floor, his left arm was blown clean off, up to the upper shoulder. He turned to look at who had done this to him... A human, was standing before him...
Previews 2 End
I now decide to end my show of previews. I realize it was not in much details, but that's how I want it.