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Post by swimstud600 on Apr 15, 2007 12:34:05 GMT -5
You've established your character and your story far more clearly than most people do, be proud of that. I'd like to know what you have in mind for a plot to continue this and if you haven't thought of one I PMed a suggestion. Still gotta pound this into a story but like you said, its a prologue. Nice work.
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Post by Professor Fann on Apr 16, 2007 3:31:40 GMT -5
Ah yes. This is a nice prologue for your character. I read them all, no doubt and this gives your character a strong basis for character development. Might not seem so direct at first but once you have this background, it can spur you to make teh best sprites out of your own original creativity. Very good. I dunno if it develops into a full-fledged story but do it at your own pace and your own management.
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Post by Brimstone on Apr 19, 2007 0:17:19 GMT -5
Aye now if only i still had Shadow and ravens old bio's but they got deleted when you shut down your site
Good job as aways man
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Post by swimstud600 on May 19, 2007 20:04:01 GMT -5
More good prologues, again I can say I understand your characters and their personalities better than most on this board. Well done, now lets see the actual story.
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Post by Professor Fann on May 20, 2007 11:24:11 GMT -5
Is it necessary to repeat the exact words of intro for each character subsections? It is quite clear that you intend to start right from the beginning, so I see those as irrelevant. Or you could have mntioned the whole 3 paragraphs in different words. Other than that, nice intros.
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Post by swimstud600 on Jun 30, 2007 20:08:45 GMT -5
Ahh, I like it. I'm sorry I can't comment more, I just don't see problems.
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Post by Professor Fann on Jun 30, 2007 22:33:16 GMT -5
It can't hurt to include some more descriptions here and there. You just have to weigh out the balance between dialogue and detail to be much better. Other than that you have a nice imaginative plot and I'm happy for you.
Hopefully whatever development of Nova and friends will make you happy and grow. I'm taking a break from ZV. If you need me, just in case, for anyhing, I'm at EraS.
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Post by ZIR0)N on Oct 1, 2007 4:52:41 GMT -5
Yeah, I kinda made a boneheaded mess up and deleted all of my previous post in this topic when I really only needed to delete all but the first one. Anyway, I removed all my old profiles and the WIP fan-fic, which I'm still working on btw, to show my NEW profile, packed to the brim with info to rot your eyesockets out.
---------------------------------------------------------------------- Player: Ryan J(Nova The Explosive Hunter, Zero-NEXUS, MasterMindZX3) Character Name: NXS-003 Nick: Nova Age: XX(Looks 20-24) Created/Born: Febuary 4th, 21XX Sign: Aquarius Race: Reploid Gender: Male Height: 6.0 Weight: 183 Alignment: Hero Occupation: Maverick Hunter (Before Death of Aisu)Sentinel/Landlord(After Death of Aisu) Social Class: Middle-Top Intelligence/IQ: 140 Personality: Optimistic,Frustrates easily,Angsty,Sometimes overconfident, Friendly. Relationship/s: Aisu(Deceased), Stormy(Ended), Gem. Family: Dr.Joseph Brooks(Creator, Deceased) Dr.Cain(Co-Creator, Deceased) Dr.Weil(Co-Creator, MIA?) Lianne Brooks(Spouse of Creator, Deceased) NXS-001/Zeo(Brother) NXS-002/Nebula(Brother) NXS-004/Photon(Sister) DOP-419/Orion(Half-Brother) Pierce(Brother-in-Law) Sharde(Brother-in-Law, deceased)
Friends: Mephistofel, Vamp, Stormy, Gem, Max, Smithy, Enigma, Amesuki, Rhonoc, Atatsuki. Rivals: Mephistofel, Pierce, Zeo, Shadow. Enemies: Nebula, Evil Energy, Sigma, Vortex. Pets: Naxe(Male Robotic Canine), Metti(Female Mettaur). Education: N/A Interests: Fighting, Making new friends, Cooking, Helping those who can't help themselves, Video games. Best Fav Food: Pork Chops. Least Fav Food: Cucumbers. Favorite Color: Light Blue Favorite Game: Virtua Fighter 4 Favorite Possesions: Blade of Aisu. Favorite Actor/Actress: N/A Strengths: His friends, His Determination, His Kindness and Friendly attitude, His many combat capabilities Weaknesses: His friends, his dark side, gambling, His unwillingness to trust others with dangerous tasks. Faster enemies.
Theme Song: Intro: WIP SNLV3 Awakened: Goku SSJ3 Acension - Dragonball Z Nova Takes Off: The Danger Zone - Kenny Loggins
Weapons/Items: Nova Buster: His first and originally most used weapon. He retired it after a previous battle with Mephistofel, saying that this weapon has caused enough bloodshed as is. It is fast and precise and the pellets it fires are potent to pierce through most armors. Still bounces off Metool Alloy though. At full charge, it can fire a strong energy beam that can actually go through a mountain. It also takes some time to charge, leaving Nova wide open for a attack by a quick enemy. Because of this, Nova never uses it at full charge when training and is always a last resort.
Blade of Aisu: An old katana given to him by Aisu, this weapon was made from a alien metal called Cryozantite or Blue Silver as better known as. In it's base form, it is a sleek weapon, capable of slashing through many materials but otherwise ineffective in hand to hand combat with another sword wielder. When a certain amount of energy is charged into the sword, it transforms into a more threatning weapon with a unique blade shape. This is Stage 1. The blade is jagged and sharp and any sword that strikes it gets caught in it's blade guard, forcing a sword lock. This form is better for defense than offense. When empowered by an extremely large amount of energy, foreign or otherwise, it takes on a larger form, even taller than Nova. This is Stage 2. The blade has a much smalled blade guard but increased girth makes it heavy enough to overpower smaller blades. for anyone other than Nova and Aisu, the sword can weigh nearly 700 pounds, yet light as a feather to the former. This form cost way to much energy to the user and leave them sapped and thus not commonly used.
Abilities/Attacks: Light of The Sentinel Surrounds the area in light-energy beams that heals allies wounds completely even if fatal. Shoryuken/Shinryuken Attacks the enemy with a uppercut engulfed in flames, Changes depending on form / Attacks the enemy with a towering uppercut engulfed in flames, shaped like a dragon's jaws. Hadoken/Denjin Hadoken/Shinkuu Hadoken Fires a blast of light energy from the palms in a forward motion / A energy blast charged with electricity / A fully-powered energy attack fired in a massive beam. Tatsumaki Sempuu Kyaku Strikes at the enemy with a hovering rotating kick hiting 3 times. Instant Transmission Teleports to a destination using the mind. Light Flash Blinds the enemy with a flash of bright light energy. Transmission Shinkuu Hadoken Combines Instant Transmission and Shinkuu Hadoken. Big Bang Boom Massive explosion of light energy in a 2 mile radius. Damage minimalizes as range increases. Dendou Reza-Genkotsu Gathers light and electric energy and uses it as a powerful offensive force, killing the enemy on contact. Black/Time Magic: HASTE Calls upon the elements to increase velocity. White Magic: REFLECT Summons a strong reflective barrier to bounce enemy attacks. Black Magic: Blizzard Calls upon the elements to summon a strong icestorm. Spellblade: ENBLIZZARD Doubles the Blade of Aisu's ice elemental capabilities.
Forms: Armor Up - Naxe Boost Fuses with robotic canine ally "Naxe" for increased Strength, Speed and RPM. SuperNova - LV1 Increases power and effectiveness of abilities aswell as Strength,Speed with Light Energy. Changes appearence. SuperNova - LV2 -See Above- SuperNova - LV3 -See Above- SuperNova - LV4 -See Above- Vortex Resurrection Revives self as alternate character "Vortex". All Light attacks become Dark and fused with Satsui no Hadou. (See Vortex character profile) Light Energy God/Envoy of Light Reaches full potential after light energy absorbtion. Stats reach MAX LV and Abilities are all full Strength, Speed and Effectiveness. Vampire Nova Becomes a vamploid-subtype when bite. (See Vampire Nova character profile) Satsui no Hadou Trades a piece of his soul for increased Strength and Speed. Unlocks Satsui no Hadou influenced moves. Evil Energy Power Increases power and effectiveness of abilities aswell as Strength,Speed with Evil Energy. (See Evil Nova character profile) Fusion Fuses with an ally to make a new entity temporarily. Only used when Nova and supporting fusion are in a equal state of mind.
Description:
Normal: When Nova is not in battle or someplace important, he can most often be seen wearing a black vest with a white undershirt and comfy light-blue denim jeans and a belt with a gold buckle.His shoes are black and white velcro sneakers.
Armored-Normal: In battle, Nova uses a cybernetic battle suit powered by Light Energy(Up until recently, it was an unknown energy). The suit is metallic blue with gold trim and blue-cyan gems on his shoulderparts, knees and the back of his hands. These are used to release energy from his hands in the form of blast attacks or hadokens. They also strengthen his melee attacks and reabsorb light energy from any source to repair himself. His helmet is shaped like wings to show his prowess for flying, in which he uses a jet-pack to fly from point a to b.
Armored-Naxe Boost: His armor takes on a drastic change and his jet-pack is replaced with metallic wings. His helmet also takes on a masked form with a visor covering the eye pockets.This form only last for a minimal time before over-heating.
Super Nova Level 1: When unarmored, Nova's artificial muscle mass increases and his hair takes on a spiky, gold style. When armored, his armor goes from a Metallic Blue and Gold, to a White and Gold color while his irises become a emerald green color. Super Nova Level 2: In this form, Nova's muscle mass becomes more toned and lean while also keeping the increased mass of LV1. His hair becomes more spikier and defined while become a much lighter yellowish white. His body also pulsates with electricity. The purpose is unknown.
Super Nova Level 3: The body's artificial muscles have increased tenfold, especially on the legs and arms. His hair also grows down his back to equal his own body length. The hair at this stage becomes a glowing Silver color while his battle aura becomes intense and stiffling.This form has no pupils in the eyes.
Super Nova Level 4: Upon ascending to this form, Nova's upper body armor shatters, exposing his chest and abdomen, which is covered in a strange, thick red fur. His irises are a dark red color and his hair becomes short again while also being white with red streaks. He also obtains another apendage; a tail, which while has no purpose but is sturdy and can be used like another arm for grabbing.
Light Energy God/Envoy of Light - Nova: By far his most powerful form, Nova's reaches his full potential as a sentinel and obtains extremely enhanced speed, power and defense aswell as the power of forsight, which allows him to predict his enemy's moves and incredible regenerative abilities. His hair is a pure white color and his eyes glow a bright yellow. His armor takes on the appearence of a paladin's armor with alien engravings on his chestplate. he also wears a cape and his Blade of Aisu is gold instead of blue silver/cyan. He can only summon this form when exposed to large amounts of light energy.
Satsui no Hadou: When Nova is in a fit of rage to the intention of murder while not being controlled by Vortex, he becomes empowered by dark energies steming from his inner rage unleshed. His hair is a dark red color and his skin also red. Only the whites of his eyes are shown as there is no pupil or iris. He is always in a black karate gi with the kanji for power glowing on his back.While in this form, he can also use one of the most powerful melee moves known to man; Shun Goku Satsu or Raging Demon. Should he succeed in using this move, he loses a part of himself until he becomes a empty shell, unable to f unction. This has only occured twice and on both occasions, he failed in using the Raging Demon.
Most Used Line: I can help you...just trust me please... Least Used Line: I...can't...win!
Backstory: (Coming whenever)
Picture: N/A
Misc Facts: While he will never admit it, he is, in fact, perverted. Fuzzy Wuzzy, Enigma's(Dark Jester) pet and friend is Nova's favorite poker partner. Nova is a poor gambler and usually never wins. He is a big fan of anime. Nova is a trusting person and is easy to play tricks on. Boxers or Briefs? Boxers. Pierce and Nova have always had a deep bitterness toward each other since their first days as hunters. They only tolerate each other because of Photon. Nova has a fondness for games, especially fighting games and chess. He can't stand vegetables of any kind, especially cucumbers. Nova is a poor drinker and can't handle his liquor. He can't stand liars. When in doubt, he is prone to being tempted with promises of power. His greatest fear is that he will go insane and hurt everyone that he cares about. The one thing he wants more than anything else in life is his own happiness and serenity. He doesn't like but LOVE pork chops, especially BBQed. Can't get enough of them. He gained the title of explosive hunter because of his incredible displays of power. Nova learned Anatsuken from an old man he saw using Hadou(A reference to the Street Fighter 2 Anime) Nova learned how to use a sword from Aisu. Nova learned some low level magic from Tony the mage. Dispite already knowing many battle techniques, he is always willing to learn something new. -------------------------------------------------------
And that his new, more informative, larger profile. If you want to be known as a friend/ally, rival or enemy to Nova, PM me and I'll add you to one of those following.
...Yeah I know his SNLVs are SSJ ripoffs, so sue me! Besides, I know many of you have ripped off Chidori and Rasengan too, some actually using the original names. Don't bug me about my forms and I don't bug you about your moves, so there.
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