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Post by Professor Fann on Dec 1, 2007 8:01:34 GMT -5
This is a parody of Devil May Cry isn't it? It would have been better if you further described Dante's job and any organization or company he's affiliated with of the demon hunting, for the ones who are not familiar with the concept you are presenting.
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Post by swimstud600 on Dec 2, 2007 0:14:59 GMT -5
In regards to the writing itself, it looked good to me. Nice job.
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Post by Professor Fann on Dec 3, 2007 13:35:48 GMT -5
Changes or updates in your free time and convenience please.
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Post by viruszero on Dec 3, 2007 16:42:52 GMT -5
Sorry guys, after I posted this it was pretty much University work all weekend. (I've still got one essay left to finish though so I won't be able to do much on it for now.)
The only thing I will address at this point is this is: It's not a parody, it's supposed to be a continuation, but at this point I'm still deciding if I want to do that or turn it into a what if / alternate universe type story.
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Post by Professor Fann on Dec 4, 2007 0:09:33 GMT -5
... hence the message "update at your own convenient time".
I think that it's nice if you went for the what-if situation. That would be more original.
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