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Post by K.O. on Sept 23, 2006 12:49:44 GMT -5
This is my first work using Paint Shop Pro 8. Feel free to comment and give me tips.  nothing here, it has been moved to my comic thread. READ ON FOR GOOD SPRITES. They get better with the pages too. |
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Post by Lern (ZX) on Sept 25, 2006 7:53:40 GMT -5
anyone gonna give me and my brother any tips or something? thats part of an important comic, ya know.
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Post by K.O. on Sept 25, 2006 15:01:36 GMT -5
At least say it sucks or something...
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Post by Drayconis on Sept 25, 2006 15:14:47 GMT -5
the top blue is far to near the eye scarring bright. I dont really get whats going on aside from they're attacking, it seems to be pu ttogether well-ish. The pieces or flem or w/e they are coming off the demon are a little confusing though
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Post by HZ on Sept 25, 2006 15:41:34 GMT -5
It looks cool, you only need to come up for a reason why you guys are fighting and tone down the color a bit do that and it will be interesting to read
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Post by K.O. on Sept 25, 2006 15:48:23 GMT -5
I have a reason and everything, this is just a part of my comic. It's not a final version so I wanted tips on how to improve it. The reason is quite goofy, you'll see it when I finish at least 15 and can start posting them. I plan on posting everyday or 2 days so I have to have some ready. Any more comments will be appriciated.
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Post by K.O. on Sept 27, 2006 13:05:01 GMT -5
Please if you can comment this one as well. This is a part of my comic that I am making, I want to see how people like it first. It's a comical/action comic and I want to know what I can change, and see people reactions to it before I start posting more.
EDIT: comic is now in my comic thread, but read on for cool sprites.
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Post by Morph on Sept 27, 2006 13:09:07 GMT -5
Well, you did it nicely, real nicely, but the second one does not make much sense. Suddenly, it says *5 hours this and 9 hours that* and suddenly you are fighting the thing you just beat?
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Post by K.O. on Sept 27, 2006 13:11:18 GMT -5
I didn't beat it, it beat me. I guess I could make that more clear... I appreciate your comment and thank you for the compliment. |
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Post by K.O. on Sept 28, 2006 8:10:19 GMT -5
This is my first work with Animation shop right here!  |
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Post by swimstud600 on Sept 30, 2006 7:46:47 GMT -5
Kind of jerky. I don't know a lot about animations but I think it'd be better if he didn't move toward the screen as he swung.
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Post by K.O. on Sept 30, 2006 11:24:11 GMT -5
I know, I pretty much suck at these things. Total noob. But i'm getting better, or at least I think I am. I'm gonna try fixing it as soon as I can.
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Post by MasterOmegaX on Sept 30, 2006 15:05:31 GMT -5
Well, for starters with animations like these its good to have the FEET of the frames still.
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Post by Nightmare on Sept 30, 2006 15:50:23 GMT -5
If you use animation shop, I can help (I animate with animation shop.)
Pretty much, to fix that animation, you just gotta line everything up. Click the "Registration Mark" (to the right of the zoom tool) tool in your animation. There should be crosshairs that come up in all the frames of animation. Drag the crosshairs down to his feet, and line them up with his feet. Then, the crosshairs will be in every frame, so just go to all the other frames, and use the Mover tool to reposition all the other frames.
I hope that helped. I can try visual aide if you still don't get it.
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Post by K.O. on Oct 1, 2006 3:53:07 GMT -5
I fixed it, hope it's better.  |
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