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Post by Goku Goku Gadget Saiyan on Jun 10, 2006 21:15:14 GMT -5
Mmm... kinky. ONOZ! IVE FALLEN FOR THE VILEX VIRUS! NUUUUUU! Anyway, it looks unique-ish.
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Post by swimstud600 on Jun 10, 2006 21:27:22 GMT -5
Its not unique, its from fire emblem but I couldn't find a good bow anywhere else. I think I did her right but I won't know if she looks out of place till I put here in a comic with megaman characters. Oh and heres another guy, not gonna tell you the name though. i67.photobucket.com/albums/h295/swimstud6/unnamed.png |
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Post by Goku Goku Gadget Saiyan on Jun 10, 2006 21:29:40 GMT -5
Tank.
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Post by swimstud600 on Jun 10, 2006 21:35:29 GMT -5
No no, Tank is going to be that Dynamo edit. Unfortunally Bossman only made 1 pose not the whole sheet, I dunno what I'm going to do for him.
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Post by Goku Goku Gadget Saiyan on Jun 10, 2006 21:43:32 GMT -5
Ehhh... is it Dagmor?
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Post by swimstud600 on Jun 10, 2006 22:11:56 GMT -5
No not Dagmor either. You haven't seen this guy yet. And here is my comic for the carnival. Its the first comic I've ever made so give me feedback.  |
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Post by HZ on Jun 16, 2006 8:37:46 GMT -5
It's pretty good considering you being new at this.
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Post by swimstud600 on Jun 16, 2006 16:07:10 GMT -5
Well the good news is that the fire emblem sprite doesn't look too out of place next to the megaman ones. If anything she just looks a little smaller.
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Post by swimstud600 on Jul 17, 2006 15:47:07 GMT -5
*revives the ancient thread*
Ok its been awhile but last night I started my first ever sprite edit, rather than my recolors thus far. Thought I'd make some sprites I could use to comic about practices or something.
sprites were deleted due to suckitude. if i ever get them looking decent i'll post them again
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Post by swimstud600 on Jul 28, 2006 3:27:35 GMT -5
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Post by zafer on Jul 28, 2006 8:50:53 GMT -5
coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool  |
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Post by MasterOmegaX on Jul 28, 2006 12:36:33 GMT -5
Well, i'd look a lot better with text bubbles atleast, but I can tell you worked hard on this (considering the amount of frames) so I think it's pretty good, I liked it. But one thing I notice about this (and almost with everyone's comics here) is that the whole fight is seen from one perspective. Its like you only see that exact same frame but only with those two little objects (the sprites) changing places and stuff poping out of no where. You should add zoom in's, change some of the camera angles to make it look more tense in the fight. Like for example around the part when Phantom is weakened you could zoom in to show him talking to himself, saying the cliche (no it's not over) or whatever, just as an example.
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Post by swimstud600 on Jul 28, 2006 15:33:59 GMT -5
Yeah, I couldn't get the text to look right and I'm thinking of making a random comic where the stage moves but that'd be more work than this one was even. And keep in mind that it was the first comic I'd ever done aside from those 4 panel ones during the carnival.
I'm debating if I should tell you guys shy they're fighting, just know that it wasn't a random comic, you may see this fight surface again months or even years down the road.
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Post by Nightmare on Jul 30, 2006 20:21:03 GMT -5
I think it came out real good. I liked it personally. Good job.
Although text balloons wouldn't have hurt.
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Post by swimstud600 on Jul 30, 2006 21:03:31 GMT -5
Ok I decided to quit being all mysterious and spill the beans on why they're fighting to the death. First off, they aren't in Neo Arcadia. Why? Because my fanfic takes place in the X series time period. What does that mean? It means in my story the guardians were created back then, they were the latest model of maverick hunter, much more efficient then those drones that the hunters have so many of. Do you guys remember me asking months ago which of X's armors Leviathan resembled? I knew which armors the other guardians were made from but I couldn't tell which one was her. And I'm just going to spill part of the plot since this happens after the "get it together rookies" saga, its either the saga after or the one after that. So chances are when I get to that point you won't remember this random comic where Harpuia and Phantom tried to kill each other.
Anyhow, the full story takes place during the X series, the maverick hunters are running out of quality hunters and they steal some maverick technology which allows them to make troops much easier. The problem is without the right materials, the troops are no more than drones. Then X sacrifices his Shadow Armor, lets the machine use that and with it, Phantom is created. Phantom is of course, totally obediant to X, when Signas gives him an order he hesitates and then X repeats what Signas says, then he does it. Recognizing this as a problem, they modified the machine so the robot created would not be completely bound to X, it could make its own decisions. So next they used X's Falcon Armor and got Harpuia. About this time, X goes maverick brining with him Phantom and a score of other hunters. Meanwhile Jet is training Harpuia with the dual sabers and when Harpuia hears of X's betrayal he retreats to his quarters and ponders for days what he should do. In the end he realizes that he doesn't have to follow X if what he's doing is wrong and he aids the hunters in assaulting X's base. Thats when he runs into his brother, Phantom and hence the reason for the fight.
Later on, X is defeated and cured of the maverick virus and Fefnir and Leviathan get created later.
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