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Post by Bloodbane on Apr 1, 2010 20:48:44 GMT -5
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Post by Albireo on Apr 1, 2010 21:27:48 GMT -5
Hmmm...
There's a good grasp on general anatomy here. Though... Did you get lazy on the sword?
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Post by Bloodbane on Apr 1, 2010 23:16:17 GMT -5
Well, like I said. I did the head, decided it was ass, and just made a placeholder shape for the sword. I think my next drawings will include a headshot, and one if not maybe both of the swords I showcased in my sprite thread (both as in the one Rion carries now and the possible future one with the dual-sword capability)
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Post by Professor Fann on Apr 1, 2010 23:38:18 GMT -5
It actually looks decently nice. Just needs refining.
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Post by Bloodbane on Apr 2, 2010 18:49:48 GMT -5
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Post by Professor Fann on Apr 2, 2010 20:57:04 GMT -5
Nice sword design. Has good shading to differentiate between the parts.
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Post by Albireo on Apr 4, 2010 22:08:19 GMT -5
Hmmm...
The weapon design actually feels like something out of Summon Night Swordcraft. And I like that game's designs.
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Post by Bloodbane on Apr 7, 2010 16:25:55 GMT -5
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Post by Albireo on Apr 7, 2010 19:56:39 GMT -5
Changes show a tad improvement, but I can only see that in the eyes.
In terms of heads, its getting better.
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Post by Professor Fann on Apr 8, 2010 3:21:26 GMT -5
I don't know ... it's a bit difficult for me to find any changes between the two. But I do credit you for the effort you made to improve it.
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Post by Bloodbane on Apr 8, 2010 14:24:11 GMT -5
That's all I really changed, Al. The eyebrow irritated me xD someone I know outside of ZV mentioned that the eyes may be too high, so I'm gonna try making them lower next time... but at the moment I'm sorta outta ideas because I don't wanna do another headshot.
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Post by Professor Fann on Apr 8, 2010 14:44:22 GMT -5
Why don't you try drawing backgrounds? Which is something else?
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Post by Bloodbane on May 10, 2010 22:56:13 GMT -5
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Post by Professor Fann on May 11, 2010 5:24:12 GMT -5
Legs seem a bit short. Use a better quality graphic pencil or paper or both to improve the artistic style.
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Post by Bloodbane on May 30, 2010 16:56:26 GMT -5
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