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Post by aritheo on Jul 17, 2008 10:26:52 GMT -5
Haha... I wanted it to look more twisted at the torso but I couldn't get it right. T T I think that and the leg and background interrupt the flow the most.
and oh GOD, IT DOES LOOK LIKE SHE'S ABOUT TO FALL OVER. 8'D Crap. I didn't even notice that. T T
And, I dunno about the hand open thing. :3 I think that it'd be hard for her to open her hand when summoning up energy like that. (she has electric elementals) but yeah...I need to figure out how to make it look like her feet are clutching the soil, either that or get some friends and stuff to take action shots for reference.
Thanks guys!
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Post by aritheo on Jul 17, 2008 10:45:49 GMT -5
MALE Did this last night~ I need to fix his shoulder, and his legs were giving me a hard time, so they might be positioned oddly, and he has hips. DX Oh yeah, those things near his arms, those are WINGS. OTL;; Not hair. His hairs relatively short and shoulder length in front and short in the back. Anyone good at drawing grass? |D;; and because I'm a dork. Drew it a while ago, but that's me. XD
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Post by aritheo on Jul 17, 2008 11:03:59 GMT -5
POST RAPE! WIP 2!~ LAO SCANNER I HATE YOU. ;A; YOU RAPE MY COLORS SO BAD.
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Post by Professor Fann on Jul 18, 2008 1:28:00 GMT -5
Hmm ... you could post all images together in single go. There's always the editing button. I like the picture where she's lying on the ground/grass and resting. That's your best most emotionally nice picture yet. And the chibi is a sweet touch together.
These two far outrank the others.
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Post by aritheo on Jul 18, 2008 9:56:35 GMT -5
*dies* Fann, PLEASE. Read the stuff. Under the pictures. @ @ That's NOT a girl. I know my characters are rather androgynous, but I take the time to state what gender they are, so please read it. @ @ Moving on~ More crap to post~ And yes, yes that is two boys. D: No you can't kill me. HZ, suck it up. They're not doing anything gross. *shot a thousand times* Alright though, the focus on this one was more on the wings, rather than the people. I've only drawn wings a few times though, so I'm rather proud of how they look, even if they could be more detailed. :3 The boy on top, Reinheit, who was the one in the previous picture napping in the grass, has small, white wings, and he's wrapping them around the other's shoulders, sort of like a protection, he's a fallen angel. Then the one on the bottom, Tuvok, is an angel servant. And he has these huge black wings (I actually made them too small) and I had him, returning that protection by wrapping his wings around Reinheit. All in all, I like the emotions I was trying to display. :3 MOVING ON AGAIN! Less emotions, more crack. This is my MAN-self, Auriciona, or -Aurice-, or Auri. XDD For short. He doesn't have feet yet because he's supposed to be conforming to some sort of uniform, and I don't know what the shoes look like. XD I have to talk to Boo. o3o I tried a slightly more cartoony approach with this as well, so the limbs might be kinda exaggerating and thin. All in all. you know. I'd be. A flamingly eccentric. Gay boy. If I was male. *brick'd* Pwehehehehe *skitters off*
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Post by Professor Fann on Jul 18, 2008 23:35:16 GMT -5
... So you're trying boys now. That's something new.
I guess they're okay. All in all.
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Just practise more and you'd be fine.
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Post by Ruinaru on Jul 19, 2008 0:14:36 GMT -5
She draws boys all the time...
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Post by Professor Fann on Jul 20, 2008 2:27:09 GMT -5
Eh, I firmly believe that previously it was girls. The duet kissing above ... I believe they are both girls as well. She said it herself, or I have gone really crazy and tired.
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Post by aritheo on Jul 27, 2008 14:15:02 GMT -5
Ehm...Fann...I draw Boys more than I draw girls... Rui meant in general. and yes, there's 2 or so pictures of two girls on here, but there was twice that you stated my boys were girls, or I believe so, and you called one of my girls a boy. Simply, just read under the picture. I'll almost always enclose their gender. Oh, and. Some WIP crap. Just got back from vacation. HZ, All three are Sojiri. BOYYY~ And I'd post the other...but..it's kinda pronny. D: And oh god does that little kid version of him reek of anatomy fail. *sob*
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Post by Nightmare on Jul 27, 2008 14:25:02 GMT -5
Looks good so far. The lines are all really clean and the details real visable. =O
Can't wait to see it when it's done. =D
On a side note; oshi- porn D=
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Post by Professor Fann on Jul 27, 2008 16:11:29 GMT -5
Eh, I'd jst make the comments as much as gender-ambiguous as possible then.
Oh, I like the left and center images. Very nicely done, and so neat too. But ... why is the person on the right's face so heavily blushed? ... it seemed that way.
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Post by aritheo on Aug 11, 2008 13:28:29 GMT -5
Or just read the captions? >: Ah, and that was the pen not cooperating with me. That's his hair in his face, not blushing. I messed up. D| Ugh;; Update tyme!~ This...uh... I'm not too sure about this... Nightmare, if you don't want this up... tell me, and I'll take it down. Nothings showing, so I wasn't so sure. Also, that's Winneh and Aurice, my girlfriend and I'd manselves. D: I'm Aurice~ the one on the bottom. So yes.. .boys... somehow. Self portraits?! LAWL. these were drawn in a MOVING VECHICHLE :'D And the first... while on a bumpy dirt road, onling using the rear view mirror as a point of reference. The second looks more like me, but I prefer the 1st. And~ There's a lot~ too. This is my OC, Reinheit, again. xD In my moreso- realism style. Inverted. XD MAAALLEEEE. D8< And this is me and my girlfriend in a more of a realistic style. and last but not least~ A collab I did with xxdeadlysinxx on dA, on iscribble.net. She drew Envy, I drew hew OC Malice. Critique on how to draw elbows, knees, And how to draw different types of facial structures for realistic purposes would be appreciated~
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Post by Professor Fann on Aug 11, 2008 21:23:21 GMT -5
The coloured art appeal to me the most. Stylish and dark yet simple.
I have nothing to say more.
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Post by HZ on Aug 12, 2008 11:46:12 GMT -5
Very nice work here Ari.
The FMA fanart in particular looks awesome.
Keep it up =D
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Post by Professor Fann on Aug 12, 2008 22:24:02 GMT -5
Oh yeah, I would recommend pursuing more collabs. I think coloured art is your style, though I'm not sure at this time your roles on the coloured arts. But whatever it is, great job.
You don't take requests do you?
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